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Okay, this is my only piece of art I can find in my pictures ! I'll get more soon. I did this about a year ago using inks, really really bright inks! xD And i kinda mixed my own style, with musical instruments and the style of an artist called Kandinsky. 'Twas some school art project thing, so we had to choose an artist to immitate. *Sigh*. Well anyway, what do you think? ^-^ ( I got an E for it, but that's because I didn't finish a piece of coursework... I think. o.o xD)
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You did go work, but make sure the colors complement each other. Your dark colors are a little hard to see on other dark colors, but I like the flow of some of the pieces.




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I'm going to try and critique this, so, bare with me.
I love the colors, just the crazy-ness of it all. I seem to be drawn to these pictures, like moths to light I guess. I give you credit for drawing instruments at all (I can't). Sometimes, the colors are a bit un-even (as in, not consistent in shade). I'm not sure if you meant it or not, because in some pictures it looks good and it works out, and I tend to do it accidently. Either way, I still like it.
Sorry that was a crap review, I'll try to see more of your artwork and review it with justice,
MV
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Wow, Sheep!

This is impressive! The only thing that strikes me as awkward is the see-through-ness of the guitar/piece of music besides it. Kind of looks like the music isn't supposed to have the guitar lines on it.

Love the vivid colors of it all. Brilliant work. Way much better than I could ever do.

Juniper ;)
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WOW!! :shock: I love it! I think that because it has some of your own style, it really adds to the colour and expresses your personality well. I really like it. :D




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I absolutely adore this! Seriously, I would hang it in my wall if I saw it at a store. Very original, Sheep Monoxide.

My only issue?

Spring Rain/ June already mentioned this, but the see througheshness (I don't think it is a word, but oh well!) of the guitar really bothers me. A lot.

Also, the guitar isn't really in the center of the piece, which is where I believe it should be. It's kind of off to one of the sides.

I especially love the piano keys wrapping around the guitar.

The vivid colors and eccentric-ness make this a great piece. You should totally be proud of it!

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I'm not an expert critiquer, but I'll do my best.

First off, I have to say this looks pretty awesome. I like the fact that there's no pattern (except music) and I like that colors contrast. Another thing I like is that there are both angular and smooth areas, so it gives it a kind of mixed up look. One of the things I don't like is that there are too many "accessories" in this image; if you had cleaned it up a little it would look better. Another problem is that it looks kind of smudgy in some areas. I know you were using inks, but you may have wanted to work on getting the colors smoother.

Overall, I say it's a pretty good picture. It's very creative and shows some talent.
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Wow.Thanks for the great advice. XD
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Wow, I must say, this is pretty great! :shock:
You earn a gold star on this piece! :o

As previously said one million times up there, the see-througheshness of the guitar really bothers me. A lot. A real lot. :P

Another I noticed that the dark colors are kind of hard to see on other dark colors, they don't complement each other very well. :D

I like how used the vivid, energetic colors to generate a peaceful, happy piece. :)

Very creative! I could really seem some style in their: not only Kandinsky's style, but much of your own. :P Much, much better than what I could ever do. I'm not kidding either.

Nice piece,
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abstract..i call it...

especcially with the lines and the colors however it is not a real abstract becasue you gave a point of interest but it is good...


i like the colors and the lines...



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