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1. I liked the color splash, but you seem to have forgotten a spot right below the (sort of) light pink 'propane pictures'.
2. Your words go crooked rather than straight out in a diagonal format (if that makes sense). It would look a lot cooler if you kept it all one font size and made it go straight out.
3. The way your models arms are posed are a little unnatural. He looks stiff and uncomfortable. Why not re-shoot it and have him cross at the wrists, rest them on the uplifted knee, and look out to the right?
This is really good. I like how the words are spaced and angled like a cone. So here are a few things I saw.
1. Right around his legs, there is some grass that’s still green. There is also a little brown grass in the bottom corners.
2. The “Propane Pictures” right above his head, the one coming off of it, and the one in the top right hand corner are a little to similar for me. (Maybe even the last one.) I would change the one in the corner. (Orange, maybe?)
3. I’m not sure if I like that man in the background at all, let alone in color. I would dull him and make him blurry.
4. It looks strange to me how the words just stop after they hit the person. Maybe you could make the words out line him. (Keep on going around him.) Keep the “Propane Pictures” at the bottom, though.
So that’s it. This is a really nice, and I like how you edited it.
Are you going to use this as like an advertisement for yourself? If you are then I would have to suggest getting rid of the various colors of "propane pictures" at the top. Then crop the top down to a little above your subjects head. The reason for getting rid of all those propane pictures is that it's a lot of busy. It subtracts from your main focus which is the guy sitting there.
Your color splash on the laces is cool. Maybe try and match the shoe lace color to the bottom line of "Propane Pictures" It'll add a sense of balance and unity to the image.
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