I found the book to be very poorly written. The story is essentially Star Wars without the depth and maturity, and with a little LOTR mixed in. That's not a big probelm for me, since I am a fan of retellings. Howeverm you should be able to disguise it or make it understood that is what you're doing, and Paolini does neither. It also drags on. They spend so much time trying to figure out what to do instead of just doing in. You could see the author trying to figure out the next step along with the characters. The characters were annoying and entirely unbelievable. The main character is a rather weak attempt at the hero archetype, and the dragon behaves in a way that is charming and witty when done by skilled writers, but is just irritating in this book. The pace was awkward, and the narrative style was just fine for a talented teen. However, it is an insult to geniuses when this book is compared with the greatest works of fanatsy fiction. It was written by a boy who has a lot of talent and potential for great things once he's developed his skills, has matured, and has gained a much wider range of experiences and knowledge.
The fact that he reached the bestseller list is the same reason a bad movie can be in the top five on opening weekend: It was well promoted, and not enough people are exposing themselves to higher-quality works. The boy's age was used as a marketing gimmick which he will suffer from for likely his entire career. I had the opportunity to meet an author who wrote his first published book at the age of fifteen. He's now in his mid-thirties, and that is still written in the About-the-Author page, and is mentioned in reviews and interviews, and articles about him. He can't get away from it, and when I asked him, it was easy to see that he didn't like the fact that this is what he is famous for. While the money teens earn through sales, if their book sells well, will help pay for their post-secondary education, it's likely that they would look back and regret starting their career so soon.
The author I met, whose name is Kenneth Oppel, also felt the same way I do about Eregon.
