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Hi! I'm time8keeper, but you can call me any variation of that you can think of :P

I'm 13 and I'm a girl. I've been attempting to write works of fantasy/sciences fiction since I was 11. I've been enjoying writing ever since. I'm not completely sure whether my writing is good or not so I'll be glad for any criticisms you can give! I'll try and give the most honest reviews/critiques I can!

So that's basically all I have to say for now! :)




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Welcome to YWS Time Keeper. I'll just call you TP. Sound good?

Honest reviews are most welcome here. I hope you checked out the fantasy and sci fi literary forums, seeing as that's what interest you. Do you like to write poetry?
What genres do you prefer to read. Favourite writers? What about music? Tell us a bit more about yourself. This is your thread and you can ramble all you want. ;)

Please check the FAQs, guides, and rules if you haven't already. It is important you know them. I'll just go through a two of the main rules.

1. No chat speak. cuz wer all riterz here n we dnt lyk 2 rite lyk tht. Pretty basic stuff. Try to keep your spelling and grammar in check as much as you can. Occasional mistakes or typos are fine, but just try your best.
2. We request that you review twice before posting a work of your own. So keep the ratio of reviews to posting your own work 2:1.

Have fun.

See you around!
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Hello! I’m Y! :D

Let’s see, I’ll tell you about the colors!

See how mizz-iceberg’s name is in blue? That’s because she’s a greeter! Greeters, true to their name, greet newbies, like you! Other colors are:

Purple. Purple people are Instructors. They critic you work, to make it even better.

Dark Green: Moderators. They take care of the forums and keep YWS under control. If you have a problem, their the ones to tell.

Light Green: Junior Mods. Basically like little Mods. They take care of certain forums.

Red: Admins. Take care of YWS, and make sure it’s running smoothly.

Orange. Distinguished Members. These are people who have honorably quit being Moderators.

Also, rate your works. Any bad language, adult themes, need to be in their proper place, some people don’t accidentally stumble upon them.

So you write Science fiction? Cool. Are you working on a novel right now? What’s it about?

Tell us about your self! Why did you pick you name? What’s your favorite food? Color? Animal? Book? Why? Do you have any pets? We want to know!

Anyway, I’ll see you around! :)
-Y




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Hey Keeper!
I'm Kat, nice to meet you, and thanks for your review!
It seems the rules have been explained to you, but I still advise for you to go to the Rules

Now, I will explain to you our star ranks!

The stars you see under an user's name are given according to their review count. Like this:

For Yellow Stars:

5 Reviews = 1 Star

25 Reviews = 2 Stars

75 Reviews = 3 Stars

150 Reviews = 4 Stars

250 Reviews = 5 Stars

For Blue Stars:

350 Reviews = 1 Blue Star, 4 Yellow Stars

450 Reviews = 2 Blue Stars, 3 Yellow Stars

550 Reviews = 3 Blue Stars, 2 Yellow Stars

650 Reviews = 4 Blue Stars, 1 Yellow Star

750 Reviews = 5 Blue Stars

For Red Stars:

850 Reviews = 1 Red Star, 4 Blue Stars

950 Reviews = 2 Red Stars, 3 Blue Stars

1050 Reviews = 3 Red Stars, 2 Blue Stars

1150 Reviews = 4 Red Stars, 1 Blue Star

1250 Reviews = 5 Red Stars


A review has to be at least 250 characters long, or it won't count.

And that's it! Tell us more about yourself!

What do you liek to write, read and review?
Ice cream or cookies?
Fruit or veggies?

PM me if you need anything!
*Kat*
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Pooh: You don't spell it. You feel it.

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Hey Keeper!
Welcome to YWS! How are you liking it so far?

What kind of fantasy do you like to write? Things about other wolds? Mystical creatures? Etc.
Do you like to write poetry?

Do you have any special talents?

Becca




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Hiiyah =]

Im Callie=].x :D . Im 13 years young :). Don't know what else to say :?

Lol

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Hiya Callie=].x!

It might be a good idea to make your own thread to get more responses. ^_^

If you have any questions, PM me.

~Rosey
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo

Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.




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Okay, so it is long past the time I should have posted more about myself! I have been gone for an obscenely large amount of time which I apologize for :-P Big things have been happening! Well not really but we'll just go with that.

Where my name came from: My username came from my second attempt at a book that was science fiction/fantasy called The Hourglass. I am going to rewrite it eventually, as soon as I straighten out some details.

I love to read epic fantasy, fantasy, science fiction, fiction and some historical fiction. I'm not too picky. It really just depends on the authors writing style.

My favorite books and series' are: Graceling by Kristin Cashore, House of the Scorpion by Nancy Farmer, the Belgariad and the Mallorean series' by David Eddings, the Harry Potter series by J.K. Rolling, the Percy Jackson & the Olympians series by Rick Riordan, Blink by Ted Dekker, the Lost Books by Ted Dekker, the Erec Rex books by Kaza Kingsley, Princess Academy by Shannon Hale, A Single Shard by Linda Sue Park, Fever 1793 by Laurie Halse Anderson, Chu Ju's House by Gloria Whelan, the Tale of Desperaux by Kate DiCamillo, Fairest by Gail Carson Levine, the Phantom Tollbooth by Norton Juster, the Kingdom Keepers by Ridley Pearson, the Ravenmaster's Secret by Elvira Woodruff and Shadow Spinner by Susan Fletcher. Woo! That's quite a bit :-P

I like to write fantasy or science fiction. It lets me completely escape from the real world and make up a world that I would want to live in. My fantasy writing is mostly other worlds with mystical creatures but it can also be in this world about people with special abilities and stuff.

I really wish I had the power to control time or extreme stretchiness and flexibility but sadly I do not have either of those abilities. I have a pretty okay talent for writing and I'm good at acting and photography. I'm also into fashion designing and like to alter my clothes.

My favorite foods are: Pizza (seriously, who doesn't like pizza?), steak, Chinese food, carrots, apples, strawberries, cantaloupe, watermelon, pineapple, kiwi, cucumbers, broccoli and lots of other stuff that I can't think of.

My favorite movie as of now is Stardust. I'm a total sucker for those romantic happy-ending movies. You will never get me to watch a horror movie though. *shudders*

I have 3 dogs: A Pomeranian, a West Highland terrier and a St. Bernard. I would really love a Great Dane but mother dearest says 3 dogs is enough :wink:

For some reason I love anything Chinese. I find they're culture amazing and really interesting. I'm in the process of finding a new teacher for Mandarin in which I hope to be fluent.

My favorite color is neon/lime green. My favorite animal is a toss-up between pandas and turtles.

I'm very... fashion forward if you will, so my sense of style is bold and funky. I don't fall into any stereo-type. I could wear all black one day and neon the next.

I like to write poetry but don't very often. I'm not particularly good at writing poetry. I also love drawing but I'm not particularly good at that either but I don't really care, I still try! My philosophy is that art is anything you've created. Art isn't about how straight your lines are or how realistic it looks, it's just about perspective, point of view, personality and so on.

Okay, I am now out of things to say! And woo, that was a long! :-P So that's me in a nutshell :-P

time8keeper
"And in that moment I swear we were infinite." -The Perks of Being a Wallflower, Stephen Chbosky




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HI!!

I'm Pudin (well, you can call me Pudin)
I can't belive how many books you've read!!
Stardust is so cute, I have to admit that I watched like a week ago and fell in love with it.
I'd really like to read some of your stories. I f you need anything just Pm me and I'll help you.

Pudin
Les sanglots longs
Des violons
De l'autonne
Blessent mon coeur
D'une langueur
Monotone.

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Hey time! Everyone pretty much covered the rules already, so I'll be quick. You're thirteen? So am I. Sci-Fi and Fantasy are pretty cool. Is there any thing else you like to write, like poems, lyrics or scripts?
Whats your favorite Ice Cream flavor?

PM Me If you have any questions regarding the site or about anything else. Thanks,

Thorn.

All our dreams can come true — if we have the courage to pursue them.

-- Walt Disney




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First off, kudos for the smiley face! Actually, I've wanted to use the word "Kudos" for a long time, and you just gave me an excuse. Yay! My name is Natasha, I'm also thirteen years old. I also like to write scifi and fantasy, and I just [b]adore[/b] romantic fiction. (Sorta) I agree with you on the topic of art, I want to bring up a topic on YWS, and I'm not sure if anyone else has said anything about it yet. Its called NaNoWriMo, which may of seem around the forums. It means [b]National November Writing Month[/b], which is basically when you try to write a novel in one month. If you think you'd like to participate, start getting ready-now! For me, and a few other users on YWS, it is our foirst time participating. I hpe you decide to join as well!

If you have any questions,comment,concerns,llamams or just want to talk or become frinds, please,please,please PM me! I love getting PM and making new friends. :D
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You Can make it all go away
The pain the suffering
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Another stich she sews




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Hey Timekeeper ^^ Welcome to YWS! I'm Shina, one of the instructor-greeters here ;) It is my job and my pleasure to greet the newbies on YWS ^^

D: It looks like everyone else covered the rules! What shall I do?

Well, I'll perform a song in honor of the YWS Grand Reopening! (did you know you made it just in time ;))

I can show you a site
Shining, shimmering, splendid.
Tell me, newbie, now when did
You last let your mind run free?

I can open your eyes
Take you forum by forum
Over, sideways, and under
on a magic greeting ride.

A whole new site!
A new fantastic way to review.
No one to tell you "no" (except the mods)
Or where to go,
or say you're only dreaming.

A whole new site,
A dazzling place you never knew.
But when you're way up here,
There's nothing to fear
Because now you're in this whole new site
With us!

Unbelievable greeters,
Indescribable instructors.
Posting, reading, free-writing
On an amazing, awesome site.

A whole new site!
(Don't you dare close your eyes)
A hundred thousand things to do.
(Hold your breath, it gets better!)

It's like a shooting star,
You've come too far.
You can't go back to where you used to write.

A whole new site!
(every turn's a surprise)
With new chat-rooms to pursue!

We'll greet you anywhere,
There's no time to spare.
Let us share this whole new site with you!

A whole new site.
It's where you'll be.

A thrilling space,

A wondrous place,

For you and me!

I think that says all. *nods* Take advantage of the all the opportunities waiting for you here! Give what you take and believe in quality ^^

Have a great time ;)

-Shina
You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.

The writer, when he is also an artist, is someone who admits what others don't dare reveal.




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Hey, hey, hey Time Keeper !
Welcome to YWS !
My name's Justdance, da da doo doo, haha.
But call me JD, everyone does !

So, you're 13 and a girl ? Ha, me too.
Great, we already have so much in common. (;
Anyways, I'm glad you've joined YWS.
It truly is an incredible place, and perfect for people looking for criticism on their work !

So, let's go over a few rules first.
1.) Give and Get. Which means, before posting any work of yours for the wonderful members of YWS to critique, you need to review atleast two pieces of work yourself. Simple as that.
2.) No tlking lyke dis. It's annoying, isn't it ? Besides, this is a writing site, and there is a reason we have such a thing called grammar, and spelling !
^_^
3.) Write ! That's what you joined for ! (:

Have fun, and hope you like YWS !
If you have any questions at all,
or just want to talk, PM me.
See ya around,
-JD.




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Hola everyone!

Yeah, Pudin, I read a lot! That's one of my very few hobbies :-P Isn't that movie awesome?

Hmmm, not particularly... I try to write songs sometimes but I'm really not good at that :-P So usually I just stick to Sci-fi and Fantasy :wink: My favorite ice cream flavors are strawberry and cookie dough :D

Yayyy! Thank you! Kudos is such an awesome word! But I never get a chance to use it :( Oh well :-P III do too! I'm a total sucker for all that romantic junk :-P I tried to NaNoWriMo last year. I failed horribly :-P The problem is that I get writer's block ALL the time. Very annoying :( I'm not sure if I'll try again though...

Ahahaha! That's a totally amazing song Shina! :D

Thanks everyone for your warm welcomes! :D




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Oh my. I just realized how many smileys were in that last post. Muahahaha. I love emoticons. It's a pathetic half-obsession. :D

~time8keeper
"And in that moment I swear we were infinite." -The Perks of Being a Wallflower, Stephen Chbosky



The thing about plummeting downhill at fifty miles an hour on a snack platter - if you realize it's a bad idea when you're halfway down, it's too late.
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