Miscellaneous Art Dump

None of these are anybody/thing, I'm making a thread specifically for characters/story sketches at some point.

This thread may grow if I doodle randomly and like it. Haha.

Hi!
I will be your reviewer today (If I may)
These are good! I found them interesting!

Okay the reviews now:

-Red Dragon
--The face is good, but the nose is too thin.
--The ribbon-like things on its head look unnatural and stiff.
--The body is very good!
--The hands are really stubby, they don't look like hands/paws (This is probably my biggest complaint)

-Turquoise dragons
--Right one
--- The body reminds me of a bent up wire, fix that darling
---The expression is quite good
---The lack of details around the face don't match up with the rest of the dragon
--Left One
---I hate to be blunt, but I dislike this one. It looks like a salamander bird-like thing.
---The neck is a weird shape and looks painful if I was a dragon
---The body is the wrong way if its neck is face towards the right
---The face is pretty good, I like it!

-Pink Dragon
--The Body is a good shape
--The neck has an almost perfect arch, fix that, make it more loose and natural
--The face is too long
--The tail is nice but a little too long

-Green Dragon
--The body twists in an unnatural way, thats my biggest complaint on this one darling
--The arms arre a little long, but the hands are nice
--The tail is too long but i really like the feathery end
--The face is great! Looks really dragon like

-Blue Dragon
--This one is fabulous darling I barely have complaints for it!
--One complaint is that the arms are to long
--The body is too thin
--I love the wings and the face, they're just great!

-Girl
--She is okay, but there is quite a bit to work on
--Her eyes are too big
--Her mouth is too low
--Her body seems a little chubby compared to the rest of her
--Her arms are to shapely, they make her seem like a body builder
--Her hand is in a weird position, holding whatever she is holding
--To add to the above comment What is she holding? Make it clearer
--Her legs are quite good!


Okay Finished (Phew )
Sorry if I seemed harsh! I really do like them I just went into intense review mode!
They are really great! Keep posting!

With Love,

K A M A S

I love them! They're adorable. The dragons, especially the red one and the one on the lined paper. I like your sketchy style, it adds a sense of rawness to them. I love the way you draw muscle and joints on them, it makes them look realistic. Then, there's the shading, which I tend to forget about. It looks great on the lined paper dragon.

The girl doesn't look that bad either. She's really good, but there's just something strange about the arms that I can't place. I liked how you drew the face and the hair, two things I can never get right when drawing. Anyway, it's really great. I'm going to be poking around for more of your drawings.

Yeah I agree the wench sucks. I'm doing a post with my character doodles and those should be better. I might take the wench down, she's not my best. *Rubs chin*

Thank you both muchly for your time. ^^