Somewhere

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Somewhere along this road, I've lost myself.
And somewhere along this path, you've left me.
And somewhere in this world, I'm missing you.
Somewhere, Somewhere, Somewhere....

Somewhere in this town, i hear your voice.
And somewhere along this line, it's calling to me.
And somewhere in an unknown place, I can't find a cure.
Somewhere, somewhere , somewhere......

chorus

I lie here........on the concrete where you left me.
Paralized by the sting of my heart.
You're sharp words hang in my head, they hang in my head.
Haunting me are the memories, I don't wanna forget
And here i am.....somewhere........you're not.........

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Somewhere i hear the voices of gossiping friends.
And somewhere along this lovers lane, i hold the hand that's not there.
And somewhere, the memories attach to my heart
Somewhere........somewhere..........somewhere........

Somewhere my heart shatters and burns, from heart break
And somewhere, You're falling in love again.
And somewhere, i lay heart broken, look what you've done.
Somewhere..........somewhere.........somewhere........

chorus

I lie here............ on the concrete where you left me.
Paralized by the sting of my heart.
You're sharp words hang in my head, they hang in my head.
Haunting me are the memories, I don't wanna forget.
And here i am.........somewhere...you're not.......

I'm somewhere your not....Im somewhere your not.....Im somewhere, I'm lost.........




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OMG... These are so good lyrics. Do you have a melody with them, because when I read them, I could so hear someone singing them.
Did you have a reason to write it, because it sounded kinda like it came from the heart...




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I don't like it...I love it. I think you should write more. i'll make you a deal. you write, and i'll read. lol i need more. lol.
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hello,

I would like to say what a great piece of writing you have. I see true feeling and heart. It was beautiful.

Beautiful writing. Hope to see more of it. :D




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paralyzed is spelled wrong. it has a y. not an i
seems like a sweet, short and simple song
it reminded me of don't forget by demi lovato. the coldness of it

the lyrics are nice.
'Somewhere i hear the voices of gossiping friends.' this takes away from the matureness of the lyrics. so you should alter that



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