Battle School

So I have never been an artist and still am not one. I have never been able to draw anything that resmebled what I wanted it to be, but by magic I have drew this picture of battle school from the book enders game It was an english project and I just wanted to see what others thought.

There are two pictures of it because one is light and the other is not. my camera isn't that best

Heeeeeyyyy, Rascal Lover!

I'm Antigone, and I'll be your reviewer today. If you don't recognize my user name, it is because I have changed it! I used to be Haruno Sakura. Just wanted to clear up any confusion.

Ender's Game! I loved that book!

But, anyway...

onto the review!

So, you say you don't pretend to be an artist, but some of this is quite good.

The asteroids are well drawn, and the shading helps them look a little more three dimensional.

The Battle School is much too flat and plain. It is basically just a square that says "Battle School." What building material is it made of? Are there windows? Space ship thingies parked outside? Add some detail!

Also, do you really think there would be a giant sign that says "Enter Here"? XD

For a school project, it's great!

Hope this helped,
Antigone

ahah no I dont but my firend was like what's that and instead of writing door i put enter here

Thanks, Im glad you liked it and once again the building is flat because I cannot draw ahaha

Oh my god! I know the guy who wrote Ender's Game! His brother works at my law firm!