This picture is very beautiful. I love how the rock formation frames the bottom right corner, and the position of the sun on this picture.
I'd have liked to see a touch more ocean at the bottom of this. It would raise the sun higher on the picture, and give a bit more meat to that thin ribbon. I find that ribbon looks a bit out of place right now. It would also have been nice to see more on the rock cliff to the right.
There are also some spots of discolouration around the bird. I'd make sure your camera lens is clean before you shoot anymore pictures. ^_^
You've followed a lot of composition rules near flawlessly, making this a very good picture. Nice work!
Questions? PM me.
~Rosey
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The colours are really beautiful and the "idea2 of it, it's very simple and (sorry for this...) cliche but it work perfectly!
Let me just give you some tips for the next time, 'kay?
1) The image's proportions are bad. Really bad. You should have more ocean, covering it until it's a third of the picture's space.
2) The bird has some problems around it. As Rosey, said and very well, clean the lens. But, these things happened , normally because of the light. There's nothing you can do, I think. The cameras sometimes picture particles of movement and other stuff, provided by the light that origins this. Don't worry that much !
3)We need a bit more of rocks !! The picture as it is not balanced. Our sight "is moved" to much for the right. It should be moved to the a half-way right, not centre and not to extreme right.
That's it for my review!
You have something pretty awesome here!
Just polish a bit more your picture composition and your done!
I love the colours in the photo. How they start at like yellow by the sun and then radiate out into this warm orange. Just looking at the photo makes me feel warmer! lol
I think I'm the same as Rosey, I would have liked to see more ocean because I bet the sun light catching the waves would have been awesome! I would have also liked to see more of the rocks but I understand that you were trying to catch the bird as well, so you were probably just trying to get the bird in the photo.
The bird makes this photo though. Without it, it would be kind of your generic sunset photo I think but with it the photo becomes more interesting.
Im not great at critquing pictures, but I just wanted to say this is a beautiful pictuter. As cliche as it I can't take my eyes away. The lone bird in the sky could be symbolitic of many things, This picture has so many directions the eye of the be holder could take it as. It's great when art can let the imagination of the viewers take it to a different level. awesome job.
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