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Maybe there could have been a betrayal or a trick in the plot, like a lie. Maybe the strangers believed that the Arrats had killed one of them, or stole something...

I don't know, but here is my profile.

Name:
King Paian

Age:
42

Personality:
He is quiet and respectful, preferring to stay in darkness rather than be in the spotlight. He tends to dwell on melancholy things, things that go wrong. He becomes frustrated, but his frustration is displayed in otherways, moreover he becomes extremely tense, and tends to hit, or break things, but he does not yell. He raises his voice to nobody. King Paian does not believe anyone should die, and is not willing to kill anyone.

He was chosen as King because of his brilliant and ingenious mind. He is incredibly inventive, trying to change things and progress them into the future. He makes descisions that would progress the country, maintaining certain alliances with other countries. He valus the aspect of trade. But Queen Dominia has other plans for the country, taking control over him, ignoring his own suggestions. The country is practically ran by her.

He was once in love with his wife, absolutely devoted to her, but the love is waining, and he doesn't know how long it truly will last. (Adds drama. ;))

Appearance:
Resembles This.
His Dog.
His Eyes.

King Paian, unlike his Queen's extremely dark exterior, has a more homely look. His carefully trimmed beard, though dark brown in the picture, is as black as the night along with his other hair. His skin is also extremely pale white making his bright purple eyes seemingly attracting, his skin it not wrinkled unless he shows any particular emotion. King Paian is extremely tall, 6"2 and has a broad build, muscular and strong.

King Paian also has a black dog that never leaves his side. The dog, when fighting, can grow to twice its size and its long white teeth become even sharper. The dog is incredibly loyal, and King Paian is never seen without his dog.

He can also be seen as an animal because he has mastered in the art of shape-shifting. But any of the animals he becomes, their coat is as dark as coal.

Element:
Darkness.

Magical Item:
He has a beautiful hand and a half sword, light as a feather and incredibly swift to wield. There is a curse inlaid on it though. If anyone else tried to use the sword they would blunder. On the handle, there is dark purple jewels encrusted, rimmed with dark black material, and silver. The blade of it has an ensciption depicting; 'Rex rgis of Infractus Somnium. The King of Broken Dreams. The blade can never break and is a brilliant shade of white silver.

It weilds magical power. It can send blasts of dark matter at people at will, and when fighting, a black aura starts to surround it.

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Thats King Paian if everything is alright with it.

~Incognito
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Name: Berend
Age: 19
Personality: Rough, sarcastic, stubborn
Appearance: http://www.soaps.com/images/news/749_1_81645.jpg
Clothes: http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk18/manwarielserin/Ranger051.jpg
Element: Earth
Magical Item: magic ring http://fantasystock.deviantart.com/art/Peridot-Diamond-Ring-105369205
The symbol is around his wrist.
Last edited by Jaden G. on Sat May 23, 2009 2:28 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Heck with Friday - the first post is up!

The story begins!

MJ

EDIT: Me and phantom of the potter are co-authoring this. I forgot to post that.
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Actually scratch the group.

Siry is a kind of good guy, in the bads. He will be torn a lot in my posts. And in others as well. Not sure whether to follow his family, or to help the other side. Not sure which side is really right.
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Okay so where are we going after Queen Dominia decides? Should the Strangers begin teaching immediately, or wait a day? And after that, what happens?

We need a storyline for the Roshans while the Stranger buisness is going on with the Arrats. I think that the Roshans find out and pay the Arrats a visit. Then Queen Isanoma comes up with the idea to kid-nap the Strangers and make them work for them.

How is that so far? Could that be the next round or so of posts?

MJ
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I like it...Its a good idea to work on. (:
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Interesting. I believe that only one of the Strangers get caught. That way, there will be two of them being distraught. We can send people after her, maybe including the King because the King does not like to sit back. And when we get there, the Roshan's try to attack King Paian and his men, including the two strangers. We can also include some of the other Arrat royal family. After the attack, the Arrats retreat, and a war is soon decided to break out. The Roshan's believe the Arrat;s are truly weak and are infedels.

I suggested that because I really don't want to be cooped up in a castle this whole storybook. I am already in another where it is like that. xD (Le Chateau du Seul).

~Incognito

(P.S. Does anyone want to join Le Chateau du Seul? It is dying and I believe new characters might spin it up a bit. xD

PM me or LaReina for details.
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Hey guys just warning you that I have exams next week and won't be able to post for a while.

Sorry!

MJ
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I like Incognito's idea! Berend is up for being kidnapped.

(Berend: No I'm not!")

**Me: Yes you are! Suck it up!**
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I agree, but here are the pros and the cons of each Stranger being kid-napped:

Pros:
Berend - needs an attitude adjust
Michiko - i guess her powers need to get stronger according to Risa
Eosa - she's the make-shift leader of the Strangers?

Cons:
Berend - can't cause trouble
Michiko - can't stop fights between Eosa and Berend
Eosa - can't teach them
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Eosa is going to have a past relationship with Siry...Boltage, how do you feel about this?

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I'm okay with it.
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Cool. I'll post now.
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I feel like people have been ignoring Shasti - Can someone PLEASE bring him back in?
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I am also having a problem because I am afraid the I can't do anything with the King at this moment in time especially because the queen hasn't posted at all. I am quite at a loss, so if there is any idea on how to bring the King back in please identify what. The King doesn't seem like a character that is needed in the story that much. :O

~Incognito
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If you want to tell people the truth, make them laugh, otherwise they'll kill you.
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