Pretty much anything but 1. Immediate thought that comes to mind is "ew, squishy" but mostly it's just that's a little freaky. Like changing all the way into something isn't as bad, but only partway?
I definitely pick 5 Number 2 is too Edward Cullen like.
I am nothing but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's or maybe like pocket candy that's just a bit too sweet.
I would definitely say two!!! 2)Ability to move things and communicate with the mind, possible precognition (cannot read minds, can only pick up thoughts projected to you from others who have the same abilities as you) I wouldn't say one because what if he transformed into a -I'm thinking of a yucky animal close to the human mass- well some yucky animal! and then kiss it? xD
Sometimes you're the apple, sometimes you're the mouth- me XD
So I wasn't going to lock this because the author might want more responses, but this thread is now over a year old. I think they've found their answer at this point.
If the author wants this opened, send me a PM. For now, locked.
~Rosey
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo
Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.
Number 2 is too Edward Cullen like.
