Tintinnabulation

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I'm no cosmopolite.
My home is amongst black Billabong thongs,
green pinecones and torn envelopes proclaiming love.
The quagmire I struggle to stand in has been
invaded by loudness that knocks over
the fragile furniture of my mind.

Today the green light sweetens
with a sugary glow, sifting through kiwifruit leaves
and summer shadows that sway on the road.
It's a flaming-freezing paradox,
these angry, rhyming spits through the speakers
and the dulcet light basking in the breeze.

I search my skin for papercuts
but I suppose two nights ago
did not affect me as much as I had thought.
Yet cutting passionfruit for breakfast
slipped a false line of dripping red across my
finger that was too bright and candied to be blood.

Morning has settled back into the niche we call
the future and the perfervid streaks of exploded colours
are cooking under the ardent ground.
Today I missed the passion of the reborn sun shaking
its burning feathers, but I felt the boil in my sleep,
dreaming of exposure and invitations.

The tattoo of thirst which taps on the lime and lemon
grass calls in my head and my tongue moves
longingly in my mouth.
The redolent sky is lined with the memories of time.
The percentage I recognise is unable to be seen
from this distance, and this day is only a jejune secret.
written: Wednesday 12th January 2004, 3:50pm.
purple sneakers




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Um....very interesting. In my opinion it just seemed like a very detailed diary entry. I also couldn't really find the point.
when there's nowhere to go, it's time to grow up.




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Very, very detailed.

Almost too detailed...

But that was good. Interesting but confusing at the same time, and it didn't really make that much sense. It does just seem like you're just telling about someone's life.
Gotta a find a woman be good to me,
Who won't hide my liquor, try to serve me tea.



"Yesterday you said tomorrow, so JUST DO IT."
— Shia Labeouf