Can YWS use this?

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Ooh, pretty! I like how it's all distorted-ish. However, I'm not a big fan of all the black around it. It looks like there's some weird demonic thing eating the poor person's face. But maybe that's just me. xD And also, you could make the pupil a bit clearer. It's kind of weird seeing a person with no pupils, y'know?
Anywayz, I like the quote on top because, of course, it's only too true.
"You can love someone so much...But you can never love people as much as you can miss them."




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Heya!

Oooh! This is cool. I like the quote at the top and the font.

The blue stands out nicely against the greys and black. But you could cut down on all that black in the left side. It seems like too much. The reflection in the eye is a neat touch.

Just fix up the black there other than that good job!

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that is where I long to be
With my three good companions
just my rifle, pony and me

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Thankyou!


I'll try to edit it.
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Wow! That's so pretty!
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This was very enticing. I would love to see that on the YWS homepage.



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