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Plot: You are in a school in Meadow brook, Washington. The day has just started or almost over (your choice) and you notice some strange noises and see some strange things outside the school. You shrug it off as just modern day noises, until other people start noticing them and they get louder.
(The monster can be of your choosing.)

Rules:
you are a student (pm me if you want to be a teacher or someone else in the school)
no sex scenes (there can be romance, but only in moderation)
no God characters or God.

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Name:
Age:
Gender:
Grade:
Appearance:
Personality:
History:
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My character:

Name: Kyrstin Barlow
Age: 14
Gender: female
Grade: 8th
Appearance: shoulder length, cappuccino brown hair with blond highlights, about 5'4'', green eyes, tan skin, and wears any Hollister shirt and a pair of jeans
Personality: Smart, determined, stubborn, quiet, and happy
History: up for love
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*Erm... is this alright?*

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Name: Ginny

Age: 2, 14 in cat years.

Gender: Female

Grade: N/A

Appearance: She's a small orange tabby that's light and svelte with green eyes.

Personality: Well, she talks. No joke. She's very clever but stubborn and defiant.

History: She followed her human to school one day.
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Name: Avari
Gender: male
Personality: very laid-back, though he had a rough time growing up. (That's putting it mildly.)

Grade: 10th

Appearance: He wears gold and black tattoos on his face and hands. Otherwise, his skin is very fair. Kids tease him about being "crazy white."

History: It'll come out in the wash. ;)
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if we don't get anymore people to join then we will start soon.

*Archer*
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Oooh, this sounds interesting!


Name: Elena Osborne

Age: 17

Gender: Female

Grade: (would she be around 10th grade?) Sorry I'm not too sure!

Appearance: She is tall, with fair skin and strawberry blonde hair. She loves vintage clothes, and takes a lot of pride in her dress.

Personality: She's bright and bubbly, but also very intelligent and deep. She is sociable, and enjoys friendships, of which she has many due to her warm, open personality. She wants to be a doctor.

History: She had a warm upbringing, and her parents loved her very much Her mother is a doctor, and she wants to follow in her footsteps. She has always been intelligent and opinionated, but diplomatic at the same time. Before moving to Washington, she lived in the Massachussettes.
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Okay!

Name: Dakota Abbott
Age: 14
Grade: 8
Appearance: (Is it okay if I just do a picture?) http://www.thecutekid.com/images/januar ... reteen.jpg
Personality: Fun, bubbly, outgoing, popular. The kind of girl everybody strives to be. She's not mean though and is usually welcoming to new students or less popular students. She is a positive person and gets along with boys and girls.
History: Her parents aren't around a lot. They are kind to her but are always out on business so her grandma cares for her. Lived in Washington her whole life. Has a secret crush on Chase.

Okay, we need a guy too so I'm adding one!

Name: Chase Harris
Age: 14
Grade: 8
Appearance: http://www.imagesmodelagency.com/images/model_miles.jpg
Personality: Fun to be around, not extremely popular but has a good amount of friends. Secretly scared of the dark. He is stubborn and is smart but doesn't get good grades because he doesn't want to be a 'nerd."
History: His mom died when he was young so he lives with his dad who is pretty nice to him for the most part.
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Name: Sebastian Moreno

Age: 13

Gender: Male

Grade: 7th

Appearance: Longish black hair, really dark eyes, tanned skin. He tends to dress casually smart, in or outside school.

Personality: He's smart, and always wants to help out or take part in things. He's learned to be laid back, but still gets quite frustrated when he can't understand what's going on.

History: He's hispanic, and doesn't speak much english :) He moved to america a few weeks ago and is pretty new to school.




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Avari looked around, slowly. His hands gripped the rail, showing the fiery tattoos that so intimidated younger students. It was all part of the act, of course.

The seventh bell had just rung; Avari knew he should be going to class. He wasn't sure of something, though.

"Hey, Ave." Someone put a hand on his shoulder. Jake Langsford, one of his friends, squinted at him. "Do you feel all right?"

"Never better," Avari lied.
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Hey when are you starting this Archer? I'm excited! :)
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Go ahead and start now if you want! New members feel free to join at anytime!
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School was turning out to be much harder than anticipated. The hallways where a mass of nonsensical sounds and words.

In his english classes at home he was a genius. He could talk about what he did at the weekend, his hobbies, objects, directions, holidays. Here, he could pick up an occasional word and make a guess at the rest.

He hurried round in search of one room.

'Liberary, liberary... liberary!'

The library.

In here, everything was quiet. Silence; means the same thing in every language.

It was almost time for lesson when he heard the strange noises, though he couldn't be sure where they where coming from. Outside perhaps?




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Dakota hurried through the building to her History class. It was her favorite class, Chase was in it. She desperately wanted to see his smile, and hear his beautiful voice.

Of course, her friends didn't know about this crush, they would only laugh. They would say something like, "You don't need some skater to break your heart."

However, she wanted him, bad. She pushed through the crowd that was starting to clear out. Someone bumped into her and her notebook flew out of her hands. She bent down to pick it up but another hand grabbed it.

She looked up, she was face to face with Chase. "Here," he handed her the notebook and smiled.

"Thanks," she murmured and blushed. Suddenly she heard a loud noise and turned around. What was that? She wondered and she guessed Chase was thinking the same thing as he was now glancing around warily.

They heard the noise again, frightened, Dakota scurried to her class.

*I kept typing the wrong names before. It was from this other storybook so sorry. I fixed it though. :)*
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Kyrstin stood with her back against the firm brick wall. The sun rained down on her as she waited for the first bell to ring.

She stood with a group of friends as they talked amongst themselves. Kyrstin watched them intently listening to there every word, trying not to spew her breakfast everywhere.

One of her friends, Milo, turned to her and asked, "Are you feeling alright?"

"I'm fine," she lied. She felt horrible. She could tell she had a fever, by the cool clamminess of her hands and face. She knew she may not be able to make it through the day by the way the world spun if she moved to quickly.

Milo approached her as the bell rang. The sound of the "God damn" bell buzzed inside her skull causing her to stumble somewhat. Milo looped one arm under Kyrstin's shoulder and guided her to her classroom.

As they entered the classroom, their teacher, who had just been lecturing the class, stopped mid-sentence as he saw Milo guide the stumbling Kyrstin down the row of desks to her seat.

She sat down and almost automatically lost hold of consciousness.

Kyrstin awoke from her murky state an unknown amout of time later in the nurse's office. She sat up and saw the nurse sitting at her desk filling out the various paperwork that lay scattered across her unorganized desk.

"How are you feeling, honey?" she asked as Kyrstin sat up.

"Better," she said.

"You may go back to class then if you are feeling better."

"Thanks," she said as she walked down the long corridor.
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I think I ought to restart.

Name: Mia Mark

Gender: female

History: Not much to tell. She saw Avari walk out of school, and...

"god dam bell."

Mia jerked her head up. "What in earth..." That couldn't be her voice. It was so... scratchy.

And where had that saying "in earth" come from?
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Why do you want to restart? I have no problem with. i'm just curious.
Please pm me fire_of_dawn to tell me why.
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