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Pirates. (Rated R for possible language.)

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Tanya- The Phoenix:

She was sitting on the side of the ship, one arm laced through the rope lattices and the other busily at work peeling an apple with an old knife when the fog grew denser. Ugh....I can't seem a damn thing. She turned her back to the water, swinging her legs back over the side of the ship. Now, she could see her captain talking to two other people on the ship.

"Cannon fire!" She now recognized Altaya's voice. Hopping off from her perch, she bit into her apple and walked over to the three as silence fell over everyone.

"It's not close enough." She was simple and to the point with her words, then turned to nod at the captain.
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*where oh where is my captain?? :( *
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Carl:


Their ship was moving slowly at the enemy ship. Everyone was hiding. He could see Leon jumping on the enemy ship and he heard what the man shouted.

"That blasted fool. What is he doing there?" He whispered to himself.

The ship was getting closer only a few feet anymore.

"Collins, ready the can'ons,"

"Aye aye," said collins and was on his way.

The hatches under the deck flew open. The cannons aimed, the female captain on board the enemy ship looked at them and saw the hiding pirates.

"Fire!!!" Carl shouted, and the air was filled with the roar of the cannons. They were only a few forty metres away from the siren and it made some bad damage on the side of the ship.

"Ready your rifles men, we're going to crash this little party."
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Altaya:

Altaya nodded in reply then turned to walk away when another explosion ripped through the air. The water rippled giving the boat a rough shove. She grabbed onto the railing next to her as everyone practically fell to the ground.

"Oh, yeah, every thing's bloody fine," she screamed at the crew, her British accent was audible. Tanya looked around, confused. Doc didn't wait another minute he took out his telescope and peered through the hole.

"Blast, I can't see a damn thing!" He threw it to the floor in frustration and Sam ran to man the wheel. Altaya stayed where she was for fear of tumbling overboard.

Tanya sputtered unintelligible words in panic than suddenly straightened up, glared at Altaya, and darted back up the mast of the ship.
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The Wrath/Siren~ Cervantes de Leon

Leon stumbled backwards into the room and feel against a solid wooden table. he quickly straightened up and glared at the door. Wasn't this just great? He glared at the door realizing that he would probably have to break down the door to get out. He lowered his shoulder slightly and charged at the door slamming it solidly. The door did not budge.

"Bloody Hell! Let me out!" Leons hit the door repeatively. "I am Cervantes de Leon! A well respected man back home!" He thought he should boost up his standing. Actually, his home did not really even want him there... but what did that matter. "Let me out this instant! I will tell the authorities!"

To his surprise the door actually opened then. There stood a girl with a mop in her hand smiling at him. He automatically raised an eyebrow and smirked.

"And who might you be?" He asked leaning against the door sill.

"I am Annelise." She chuckled slightly.

"And what may I ask is so funny?"

"You smell like a drunk, you look like a hobo, and I dare say, you definitely do not look like you have been on the sea for very long." She replied smugly. But their short conversation was ended by a tall man pushing her away with a pile of rope.

"Um... I guess I am free to assume that that is for me eh?"

The man did not look at all impressed. But that awkward conversation was cut short also but a humongous blast that sent the ship veering to the right. The power of the crash sent Leon reeling backwards making him slam his head against the sill.

"Damn."

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*can I somehow join another ship? my captain seems to have died and my invisible crew has also dissapeared...Like I float to thier bot or something??*
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The Phoenix - Samuel Barker - First mate

Sam grabbed the wheel as another explosion rocked the water around them. He shot Doc a wild, fearful look, "There's no way that another ship could have cannons like that - not out here, anyway! It'd take something bigger than a flagship for that kind of power!"

"Oh please!" laughed Tanya as she scaled the nets back towards the crow's nest, "Don't you two start with your nonsense again!"

Sam glared up at her, shouting over the growing hiss of the rain as more rain poured down on them, "Then you have a go at explaining all this!"

Serrino Fortner

Storming up from where he'd been, leaving his cards scattered across the floor, Serrino shoved the hatch open. It was bucketing down, and he had to hold up an arm to shield his eyes. "Would somebody please explain to me what on God's green earth is happening to our vessel now?"
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Lizzifer,

I think you should join our ship. Our crew seems small and we could use another member....I could help you over the railing since Altaya is well standing next the railing. :D
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I'll make miself another pirate: if that is okay with ye chaps?

Name: Randal Collins (Mr Collins or just Collins)
Age: 25 (or if it's okay 35)
Backround: Became a sailor at the age of ten, his ship was captured by pirates five years later and he chose to join that crew. Then came Carl and killed their old captain and made collins the second mate.
Other: Brown hair, brown eyes, tanned skin, looks boring, a angled face. Normal length.
ship: Wrath

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Carl- captain of the wrath:
He took a blank and put it on both the ships so that he could walk across it to the other ship.

When he got over he turned to Collins.
"Collins go and find Leon,"

"aye aye."

Carl turned at the battle before his eyes. He studied it for a second and then pulled his cutlass and barrelled gun and smiled.

"The dead men tells no tales," He whispered and ran into the fight throwing his sword around.

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Collins:

"Find Leon, find Leon....." He took a sip of his rum.
"Where is that lonesome hobo?"
He saw an open door he walked to it and noticed a girl and man on the floor next to it unconscious.
He looked inside the room "Leon! Here ye are ye bloody bastard!"
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If you're part of the Phoenix you already have five. Try joining another crew that has only a few people.
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I'm part of the wrath
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The Pheonix~Altaya:

The rain pelted her skin and sent icy fingers down her back. Where was the cannon fire coming from?

"Help," said a voice through the fog,"Help me!" She could hear the person struggling to keep the water out of their mouth. Altaya leaned over the railing and almost lost her footing, but Doc grabbed her elbow.

"Watch yourself, mate." He and pushed her away from the rail and proceeded to help a figure out of the water and onto the rainy deck. They fell with a thud. Altaya dropped to her knees next to the pirate. She must've been floating on driftwood. The pirates chest rose and fell gently, and as she examined the body, Altaya realized it was a female.

"Can you tell us your name, Pirate?" She asked.


*Lord Anzius, on your next post put the name of your ship next to your name. That might save from another mix up*
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Name:Trielle De Montez [Elle for short]
Age: 17
Gender:Female
Appearance:She has long curly red hair which is normally pulled up. Dark green eyes with tinged blue ovals around each pupil. She loves wearing wearing head bands. She normally wears this, Casual outfit Persuasion
Look at the red haired chick xD now she doesn't look like this in my mind but, its the closest i have!
Trielle
Personality: She's straight out when she wants to tell you something important, she doesn't show emotions, she's down to earth and normally knows what she's doing.
History: Her family left her behind with an alcoholic, but when he began beating her she decided it was time to leave. She has scars all over her body from when the man hit her. She's trying to figure out where she belongs when she comes across a ship that welcomes her aboard.
Ship: Siren Song
Other: She is very prone to danger when people know a lot about her, so she keeps quiet about her life and what heritage she came from. She can fight like you wouldn't believe. She loves to draw and is actually good at making her drawings lifelike. She has a bad habit of biting her nails and being a klutz
She is definitely up for love but mind you she is a very shy type of person so, you have to be careful.

Trielle De Montez~Crew member of Wrath

"What the bloody hell is Leon doing?" Trielle muttered to herself, having had an exhausting night. She needed to report to the captain but she had a feeling he already knew. Collins had gone to go get him, as she looked out to the seas.

The chilled air was very refreshing, Trielle looked to the clouds which were a darkened gray. A crooked smile spreaded across her face as she embraced the moment of peace. After the moment had passed she wrapped a head band around her hair to keep it out of her face. Then she went to get a bottle of rum to begin working for the day, she found one unopened under her cot. She laughed triumphantly and gulped down more than half of it.

"Time to get to work Elle." She mumbled to herself not at all affected by the alcohol, She never was. She rushed onto the first deck and went to the captain for orders.

"Captain. Orders?" She addressed as she was supposed to, her eyes dwindling on the purple horizon.

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Carl captain of Wrath:

He turned towards Elle. "Wel'' we rage unto the ship and we kill as many buggers as we can, then we will have a long nice talk with their captain," He turned to look left "WHo seems to be there," HE pointed at one of the women fighting with Carl's men.
"Now if you would excuse me I have to go kill my way there," He smiled. and then he was gone
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The Phoenix~Altaya:

Voices screamed over the boom of more cannon fire and swords could be heard clashing through the rain. Soon enough as Samuel guided the ship through the fog, two ships came into view. A plank was visibly linking them together. Altaya ran from the Pirate on the deck and began piling ammunition into the cannons .
"What are you doing!"Samuel called from the wheel. She ignored him and continued to her duty as a pirate.
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