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*I don't know I'm not sure either but I'm just gonna say yes and sorry I should of cheked It was cools to do that for revenge dam I'm sabbotaging this with comments I'll stop now*




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Guys, I think we should start using the DT for the little comments and such. I always get my hopes up, excited to read and maybe possibly have a reply to my post, but they're always just little comments...
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Give him a mask and he will tell you the truth."

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*Okay...*

Marianne

After I talked to Shannon about the costumes, I went to the hall to see who could I find. I was alone and bored. Urgh... this sucks!
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A-ha! An opening *squeezes through*

Kori

"Whoops, sorry," Kori said, uncaring. She offered a hand, flipping her curly hair behind her should as she did so. She helped the girl up.

"Sorry," Kori said again, aimlessly, not really paying attention to what spewed from her mouth.

"S'okay," The girl said, brushing her butt off a bit. "I'm Marianne, by the way ... and who might you be?" She looked questioningly at Kori.

"Kori Baker."
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Sorry. I've needed to do this. Why? Because Kori has only met Kevin so far.
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MATT

After May came over I told her to stay in my room. I ran to Chad's room and grabbed the basket of food that I had hidden there. I ran as fast as I could to the Old abandoned Gym and ran up the steps to the roof. I would have done it on the ground but there were no private woody areas on campus. The roof however was an eco roof, eaning it had flowers and trees, and would work fine. I took a blanket out of the basket and spread it on the grass. Then I lit a couple of candles, and set the food on the middle of the blanket. When It was all ready I jumped off the roof and ran back to my dorm.

I put a blindfold on her and led her across campus. She didn't say anything teh whole trip. When we reached the roof I took of the blindfold and heard her gasp.

"What do you think?" I asked, sort of tentatively.

*im about to go out to dinner so, I just set it up.*

Oh yeah, on the sex matter. Im pretty sure its fine for your character to have sex, but no descriptions, we dont want this turning into a porn story. Anyone one who does this will be kicked off YWS, and the storybook will be disbanded. If you do want your character to do it, then PM the other person first and then say something like 'they became one' or something like that, just let us know that you did it, with minimal description. Im going to check with an admin tonight to see if thats ok. If anyone wants to do it now though, I would appreciate it.
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May~~

Random~ Random~ Random rararandom~!

I sang in my head as Matt's hands grasped my shoulders firmly. He led me up a flight of stairs and right now we could be in any of the main buildings. slowing to a stop he let go and undid my eye's cover. Looking at the layed out seen I put my hands over her mouth and jumped and hugged Matt. This was a dream, that should belong in a fairy tale, not at a random boarding school. I kissed Matt and he slowy went to the blanket.

"What do you think?" he asked cooing.

"I think I may love you," I said as the almost full moon smiled upon us.

We laughed and bantered eachother, then.....

*anyone or Damar were you planning something?*
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*nah, just a picknic (I think I spelled that right) but I has lots o homework, so I am going to let you write*
Words - so innocent and powerless as they are, as standing in a dictionary, how potent for good and evil they become in the hands of one who knows how to combine them. ~Nathaniel Hawthorne




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Nikki

It was..Sean, of course.

"What do you want?" I growled at him. Showing your fear was never a good idea in front of Sean. He felt empowered.

"Nikki, why on earth are you holding a baseball bat, hon?'- He asked, distracting me .

"I was...uh...practising."I lied.

"Indoors?"He would win this one,the way he had won others. I glared at him.

"What do you want, Sean?"-I asked.
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"Take me back." he looked up holpfully.

"Right. So you can hurt me again, I think not."- I said, as I glared even more. When would he get the message?

"Nikki, I've changed...I'm a different person, now." He said. He looked unbelievably cute, I wanted to believe him but...

"If you were a different person Sean, you would not be sneaking in other people's schools so you can torment them.Get out." I tried to push him out of the door, unsuccesfully.
"Get out, you creep, or I WILL scream"
"Nikki, don't be like that, we used to have fun together.We used to be...nikki and Sean, remember? The jock and the cheerleader."
"Don't call me that, I don't want anything to do with you, anymore. Out." Of course he didn't budge. he'd always been stubborn that way. I left him and banged on the nearest door I could lay my eyes own. Someone opened the door. "What the hell?"

*this is Parent's night,up there, someone please jump in by the way. *

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*here's Marianne costume, supposedly draw by Shannon: http://fancydressheaven.co.uk/index.php ... D=1014538*

Marianne


Kori ran it to me and we started chatting. After a while, she had to leave, so i was left alone again. I knocked on Alyse's room.
Hey Maria!" Alyse said, when she opened the door.
"Hey. Watcha doin'?"
"Eh, nothing much. Wanna hang out?"
I nodded and sat with her on the small couch. We started chatting about Halloween and another million things.
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*I'll talk to Lei and yay this is R now so just try and stop my character from swearing and saying what ever the hell he wants*

Adam

I walked down the corridor and heard Lei playing the guitar. Right now I didn't care if it was any of my business to talk to Lei about her relationship but I kinda saw Nick as my best friend here *is that right* apart from the whole beating up incident.

I walked in and She stopped playing her guitar.
"hey Lei look I know that I've messed with your relationship before but you know Nick really dose like you he you know he just doesn't want you to become a rebel like girls he dated before have" she was about to reply but I was too fast and started talking again.
"Lei Nick is like a female rabbit if he has to get rid of one mate then he will but then he'll move on and get another rabbit and then another and another just so he can take his fill if you no what I mean but really he'll just want that one rabbit that he didn't get his fill from and had to dump okay so that isn't really like a rabbit but you know what I mean right" she looked at me blankly
"um kind of" she said blankly I gave her the thumbs up and told her to go and speak to Nick. My work their was done.

* I have no idea what time it is but I'm gonna say it's late and now it is time for drama*


I walked into say goodnight to Shannon.
"I had a great time Shannon' I said but she looked miserable.
"Adam I didn't want to get into serious relationship here and now because of your fucking school boy needs I have".
"What the hell are you talking about just cause we had sex doesn't mean were in a serious relationship it just means it's no longer an open relationship and a stable relationship but h you know Shannon I um really like yo and maybe I would like a serious relationship do you want one though" I finished hopeful.




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Shannon

I was a bit "sad" about what had happened between me and Adam. Not sad sad, just sad because I brok a promise to myself. I love Adam and I don't regret what I had done. I just just bumped.
"What the hell are you talking about just cause we had sex doesn't mean were in a serious relationship it just means it's no longer an open relationship and a stable relationship but h you know Shannon I um really like yo and maybe I would like a serious relationship do you want one though" He said.
"Of course and I want one too. I'm just bumped with myself. Besides, I loved it and I LOVE you. I don't want this to finishis." I replied. He gave me a happy smile and lunched in my arm. We hugged each other in a romantic way. Neither none of us wanted to slip up but it had to be. We kissed and went to each other's room. I slept like a baby waiting anxiously for Halloween.




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Nick~~

ring ring my phone sounded off. I reached down and pulled out the phone, the call was from Lei. I wanted to answer it but I couldn't. So I let it go to voice mail and then looked up at the ceiling of the skate tunnel. After I broke up with Lei I went here when I needed to be alone. The phone rang again, as Adam this time.

"Hello," I said.

"Hey Nick," I heard Lei's voice. Immediately I hung up and went deeper into the tunnel. Adam, why were you doing this to me.

The phone rang again and again, but eventually it stopped. So I hopped out of my tunnel and headed back to my room, but i took the fire escape instead to avoid a Lei who might be in the hall. When I got in I saw a not from Tony saying he was out. Then I locked the extra two locks on the door, went to the band room and locked that door to. After that I began to pound out a few beats, I was currently teaching myself guitar, and was doing pretty well. I could crank out a song on it, and was currently writing a song to include all the instruments I had in here, sense I could now play them all.
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May~~ Thursday- Late Night

Let's just say, I was on top of Matt again by the end of the night. We roamed back to our rooms and kissed again to mark us going opposite ways. My head spun as I walked through the room because everyone had obviously gone to sleep. I collapsed when I finally pulled out my long waited lolita dress buried in my closet.

********next day*********

I awoke and scurried around putting on all black,my studded hand cuffs and my pair of cat ears with a bell attached. Batting the bell and walking into the living room I found that I was alone, again, like the insomniac I was. I cooked big bat shaped pancakes waiting for the rest of our small community to wake up.

Today was gonna be fun



*someone come meet May for some yummy batty pancakes!*
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Shannon

*Halloween morning*

I woke up happy. I had slept very well ans I was very excited too. I decided to take a shower and get dresses. My stomach creamed with hunger so I went to find food. I got to the living room and smelled something really yummy Ummm... Pancakes... I found May cooking
"Goo morning!" I said with smile on my face.
"Good morning! You are very happy today. What happened?" She asked.
"Um...Lots of stuff. I'm just happy AND it's Halloween.!" I answered.
"Yeah, I'm excited too. I'm really hungry, wanna eat?"
"Of course. I'm starving too!" I replied.
We almost didn't speak while we ate. It was so good
"May! You cook very well. This is delicious." I said. My face was pure delight.
"Oh please. It's not that good..." She said while bushing. "So, what are you gonna wear today?"
"Oh! That's surprise..." I said with a sneaky look "Only tonight..." I said while moving my fork in a crazy way"Uuuuuu...." We both laugh.!And you? What are you going to wear?" I asked.
"Umm. I don't know if I should tell you...."




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*Are we gonna have another skip after Halloween or are we gonna go for a few days after*

Adam

I woke up and looked around my room. I grabbed my phone and called Nick he picked up a few seconds later.
"Lei I swear if this is you ...." I interrupted him
"Na Nick it's me, sorry about letting Lei use my phone but I was happy I kinda of expected to have to pull a bit of romance out of my ass" I heard slight laughter from the other side.
"Adam that's because Shannon doesn't like you because your romantic that's Matt and May's glue and at least I've done it before first timer" I laughed and gave him the finger through the phone.
"anyway mate you should call Lei we both know you like her" I could hear Nick sighing a little bit on the other side of the phone.
"yeah maybe, maybe not see ya" He hung up and I pulled my self up. Sadly I needed to go to work not that anyone was normally their.

I opened the door and walked in as usual staff of the market from across the store were waiting to get a coffee.
"you know that friend of yours came in the shop the other day and some condoms very wrong I mean is he married.
"no he's just a bad egg" I said feeling guilty not that probably cared.



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