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Roaming Shadow
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Wed Apr 18, 2007 2:09 am
Roaming Shadow says... · Wed Apr 18, 2007 2:09 am
6/10. I'm assuming it's part of a poem, but on its own it isn't all that interesting. And why the small font?
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bubblewrapped
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Wed Apr 18, 2007 5:20 am
bubblewrapped says... · Wed Apr 18, 2007 5:20 am
8/10 but only 'cause it's POTC XD
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Jennafina
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Wed Apr 18, 2007 5:27 am
Jennafina says... · Wed Apr 18, 2007 5:27 am
6/10. I like how it sounds, but I don't get it and don't know what Wings of Desire is.
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Sumi H. Inkblot
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Fri Apr 20, 2007 10:33 pm
Sumi H. Inkblot says... · Fri Apr 20, 2007 10:33 pm
I don't get the reference, but it made me grin. 8/10
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Dynamo
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Sat Apr 21, 2007 1:59 am
Dynamo says... · Sat Apr 21, 2007 1:59 am
Pretty nice. 7/10

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Twit
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Sat Apr 21, 2007 12:37 pm
Twit says... · Sat Apr 21, 2007 12:37 pm
5/10

I don't get it, cause I'm dense.
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Dynamo
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Sun Apr 22, 2007 12:11 am
Dynamo says... · Sun Apr 22, 2007 12:11 am
6/10

Doesn't it always happen that way?
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Sumi H. Inkblot
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Sun Apr 22, 2007 12:23 am
Sumi H. Inkblot says... · Sun Apr 22, 2007 12:23 am
8/10. Very logical :p
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HeadInTheClouds
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Mon Apr 23, 2007 1:05 am
HeadInTheClouds says... · Mon Apr 23, 2007 1:05 am
6/10
Meh. I don't really get it.
If I don't write to empty my mind, I go mad. ~Lord Byron

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Dream Deep
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Mon Apr 23, 2007 8:00 pm
Dream Deep says... · Mon Apr 23, 2007 8:00 pm
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7/10 - Oh so true, the first part.




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Ofour
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Mon Apr 23, 2007 8:11 pm
Ofour says... · Mon Apr 23, 2007 8:11 pm
Indeed, Con Fuoco. Italian is funny. 8/10.
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Sumi H. Inkblot
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Ofour
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Tue Apr 24, 2007 4:01 pm
Ofour says... · Tue Apr 24, 2007 4:01 pm
Lol 9/10, BTW you have to read the book to get it.
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Firestarter
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Fri Apr 27, 2007 5:16 pm
Firestarter says... · Fri Apr 27, 2007 5:16 pm
0/10. I don't know where it's from, and there's no indication either!
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Dynamo
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Sat Apr 28, 2007 1:39 am
Dynamo says... · Sat Apr 28, 2007 1:39 am
7/10

Pretty poetic, but I've never really been a fan of poetry.
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