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A birdy I drew and coloured for Chinese New Year class decor,
Oil pastels. The circular thing at the bottom right is an 'artistic' way to write the chinese word meaning Fortune/Luck.
Tips to improve on the colouring, anyone?
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I really like the boldness in the separation of colors. The monochratic background makes the bird really pop. The blending may have gone a little smoother, but the way it is slightly off works for this.The flowers look a little messy the way they disregard the outlines. I like they way the outlines themselves aren't just black and have a bit of the surrounding colors in them. Nice job.
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Hey there Meep! I liked this; the bird really pops out and I loved how it wasn't much defined. So, I agree with everything above.
What kind of materials did you use for this?
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The background is red because its a lucky colour according to chinese beliefs.
I used oil pastels and well...something black for outlining.
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This is gorgeous! You're very good at art! The colors are so vivid; it's perfect. The only thing I would change is maybe making the beak a little bit more prominent.

I really like the simplicity of this, and the chinese writing is perfect. Well done, Meep! :D

Keep it up! Can't wait to see more!

(also, congrats on getting your oil pastels so neat xD)


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Ooooh! :) I LOVE the colors! Very bright and bold! It reinds me of a Chinese/Japanese style. I like ti very much!
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Ooh, I really like this! It's so bold and the bird really pops out. The Chinese symbol adds to it. And you did this in pastels? I have so much trouble when I use those. The only thing is the bird's head. It looks kinda funny? Or maybe its just the beak like June said? Well, I love it. Good job Meep. It's bold, cool, simple and different all rolled into one. Can't wait to see more of your work.
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Wow meep this is beautiful! The only thing I would change about this are the colors you used. For me red and blue don't contrast too well. Maybe you could make the bird green (hehe, a green bird would be interesting...:P) and keep the background red? Or maybe even make the background slightly lighter? Other than that, great job on this! Having colored with pastels, I could never color anything without having it smudge...Yet, you seem to have accomplished this with ease...Excellent job! Oh, and gold star for you...as usual!
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This is so beautiful! No for real. Except at the begging when I read the topic name I laughed because I thought "Who would look at a picture of a bird?" But now I see how Amazing it is! The only thing I think you should correct is the topic name because it sounds boring. If I would be you I would call it "The Bird of Fortune" or "The magical bird of luck".
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This picture is really good! Birds (for me) are really hard to do because I dont like to get pictures off the internet but I cant draw actuall bird because they move too much but these are amazing!




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I like the coloring. You're bird is so cute! I also like how you've included the Chinese character for luck as one of those stamp signature things. The only complaint I have is that the twig the bird is standing on is shaded so that it has less perspective. You can possibly darken the far away parts a little bit more or make the closer parts lighter. Besides that, awesome bird! xP
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When I first saw this I was like WOW.
To be honest I thought it be a pokemon named Wailord at first but then I realized that it was a bird instead. It is very colored and the background suits it very well. You could working on the beak a little and if you decide not to, it doesn't matter. It looks good this way also.
Keep up the great work. (:
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