Life and Death

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Death begins a new dawn
It starts with a light
In a never-ending tunnel
And creates an exciting journey

Life begins a new dusk
For in the beginning
There may be light
But eventually, it fades to black

Death starts a new day
It’s not an endless night
Just the other side of the looking glass
The world behind the mist

Life starts a new night
No one knows what you will find
And there are only pin points of light
To guide you on the twisted path

Within death there is life
Full of choices, full of decisions
Once you do something
You can never take it back

Within life there is death
It lurks behind every corner
Ever watchful, ever searching
For when you body collapses
And frees the eternal soul

Life, death, what is the difference?
In each we come
And in each we go
The only mark leaving in each world
Are memories




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Now this was terrific. Congratulations, I don't really have anything to say. I was left standing impressed after reading that.

My apologies if you were looking for some in-depth critique, I just don't have one.
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