Abortion

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wow.

really really good

i'm pro-choice and you havn't swayed me which is no doubt your intention..

but I respect the passion with which you believe.

The pen is mightier than the sword, and I'm sure infinitely more mighty than the bombs let off in abortion clinics.

If only there were more people like you to support your passion without slipping into ignorant hypocrisy and turning the whole issue into a bloodbath.

The world would be a better place.

I feel I should tell you why I am not persuaded so you do not think that I condone what you have just written: I don't believe that fetuses would think like this, the wouldn't have any regrets about not being able to live, because they have no idea what living is like.

A beautiful piece of writing nonetheless.. starred :-)
I should have been a pair of ragged claws
Scuttling across the floors of silent seas. . . . . .

"The Lovesong of J Alfred Prufrock" T.S Eliot




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Hello there Milascribbler, the name's Kenzie and I don't know how to thank you. You brought up the one thing I've wanted people to understand for the longest time. Also, it was a good read. I liked how the rhythm made you want to keep reading. But, I am glad you showed what they actually do to the children. Fetuses are alive, they are not dead as some people think. Did you know that they have their mouths open while the abortionists are doing the procedure. It's called the silent scream, if you don't believe me Google the silent scream, it is graphic but it tells the truth. It makes me sad when I hear people saying they want abortions, it's murder.

But anywho! Your piece has made people see the harm that our world does. I believe when I get the time I will attempt to make people see through my eyes as well. Thanks so much for the inspiration. C:

With all due respect,

Mackenzie



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