TO SURVIVE ....TO KEEP GOING ON.... YOU WORK TO KEEP A HOME FOR U AND YOUR FAMILY ... A CAR ... OR TO PAY FOR WHAT EVER NEEDS YOU FEEL YOUR LIFE IS INTITLED TO.... SO WITH THE OPPERTUNITY THE WORLD GIVES YOU TO KEEP FOCUSING ON YOUR NEEDS YOU AGREE TO IT OR COMPLAIN ABOUT WHY LIFE IS HARD FOR YOU THROUGH WHAT EVER PROLONGS OR JUST HOLDS YOU IN THE SAME PLACE FOR ALONG PERIOD OF TIME...YOU HAVE GOD ... HE PROMISSES YOU SOMETHING THAT MONEY CANT BUY ...SOMETHING THAT NO MATTER WHAT SKIN COLOR YOU IS .... OR WERE U COME FROM U CAN OBTAIN....ALL YOU HAVE TO DO IS BELEAVE THAT JESUS DIED FOR ARE SINS AND HAVE THE UP MOST LOVE OF GOD .....THATS ALL FOLLOW HIS COMMANDS .... PUT YOUR TRUST IN HIM ....COME ON ......YOU PUT YOUR TRUST IN YOUR JOB TO GIVE YOU A CHECK EVERY WEEK TO TWO WEEKS.... WHY YOU CANT BELEAVE IN A GOD THAT AS BEEN THERE FOR YOU WITH OUT ASKN YOU FOR NUTN.....WHEN YOU BEEN SINNING ALL THIS TIME ..HE WAKES YOU UP .... KEEPS GIVEN YOU MORE TIME TO REALIZE THAT THERE IS BETTER BUT NOT IN THIS WORLD THAT IS SO TO BE NO MORE ....REGUARDLESS OF WHAT YOU CHOSE THERE IS GONNA BE A BREATHLESS TIME FOR EACH AND EVERYONE OF US WHEN IN THAT TIME WHEN YOU A FEW SECONDS FROM DEATH WHAT YOU DID IN YOUR LIFE TIME WILL REFLECT THROUGH YOUR MINE ...AND YOU ASK YOURSELF NOW ....AM I A TRUE FRIEND TO JESUS CHRIST AND TO HIS FATHER .....BUT BE4 YOU ANSWER THAT MAKE SURE YOU KNOW WHAT A TRUE FRIEND IS ....GOD WANTS YOU EVEN IF YOU COMMETED SINS ALL SINS ARE THE SAME ....LIFE ITS SELF IS A SIN ....BUT WITH JESUS CHRIST AND GOD ARE SINS CAN BE WASHED AWAY ....PLEASE IM BEGGING YOU STOP WHAT YOU DOING AND GET A GOOD UNDERSTANDING OF WHAT GOD WANTS FROM YOU ......GOD WANTS YOU TO LOVE AND HE WANTS TO LOVE YOU BACK ..... AND I KNOW THAT BECAUSE THE DEVIL DOESNT WANT YOU TO KNOW GOD AND WHAT HE DOES SO EVEN WHILE DOING WRONG AND NOT KNOWING GOD THE DEVIL WOULD DO ANYTHING TO LEAD YOU TO YOUR DISTRUCTION .... BUT YET YOU MIGHT BE THE TYPE ON DRUGS ...A FIGHTER OR GOING THROUGH WHAT EVER PROBLEMS BLAMING GOD OR YOU JUST MIGHT NOT KNOW HIM ...BUT WHO IS THE ONE WAKEN YOU UP REGUARDLESS OF YOU CURSE OF LIFE GOD ....ITS JUST UP TO YOU TO FOUCES ON WHAT IS RIGHT ....THE DEVIL LEADS TO YOUR DISTURCTION BUT GOD LEADS TO EVERLASTING LIFE IN A MUCH MORE PEACEFUL PLACE WERE WHAT EVER THE DEVIL TOOK FROM YOU IS GIVING BACK IN A GODLY MATTER 100 TIMES MORE .....CHOOSE LOVE ...CHOOSE BETTER THAN ANYTHING THIS WORLD CAN GIVE YOU ...IF YOU WAS INFRONT OF TWO TABLES ONE WITH A BIBLE ..THE WORD OF GOD AND ANOTHER TABLE WITH 50 TRILLION DOLLARS WHICH WOULD YOU CHOOSE IF YOU WAS ALL AROUND PEOPLE OF THIS WORLD SOME THAT SAY THEY KNOW GOD BUT DONT SHOW IT ..SOME THAT FOCUS ON WORLDLY OBJECTS . SOME THAT LEAD YOU TO THE GOOD LIFE OF THIS WORLD AND ONE FRIEND THAT WANTS TO KNOW YOU ..... WHICH WOULD YOU CHOOSE ....YOUR ANSWER DETERMINE IF YOU IS A TRUE FRIEND OR NOT .... [b]
Hey this is no poetry. First you should put it in poetry structucture which means stanzas and all. Second you're vocabulary should be spelled out correctly, live in stead of "u" put it "you".
And it shouldn't all be capitalize.
PM me when you've turned this to poetry
Piglet: How do you spell love? Pooh: You don't spell it. You feel it.
It was...interesting. But I think it would be better and easier to read, as stated above, if it wasn't all in caps lock. Some spacing would be nice too, so it's not just a big block which is hard to read.
Ryllie
"It's my timey-wimey detector. It goes ding when there's stuff."
I agree with the other comments. You need to order it into seperate stanzas and take off the capitals. Because it's really hard to read, I gave up. o_x
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