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You're comic is awesome.
Regardless of any lame grammar mistakes.

Spectacular drawings. But its certainly a tad confusing. It's not very clear whats going on.
Keep it up.

Oh and rincewind, I saw your sig and wanted to try something like it.

~The bandit’s body stumbled backwards and fell to the ground, head hitting the pavement with an stomache sickening splutch, his face gone. The delayed blood flow from his head caught up as the body twitched its last death spasm, kicking up dirt into its gushing wounds.~

Okay good story so far weird, but good.

That last comic was of pure amatuer quality. It would be professional if you coloured itin , since your so good at that too.

Haha, good venture into the world of gorey writing. I liked it. Spasm is a friggin awesome word too, in my humble opinion.
I like how he died, and kept the story going, like in Foonkerpop.

Im addicted now, keep it up homeslice.

Rince, its now inked! But inking takes forever, so either half the comic with ink, or keep it in pencil.

I really like it that it's cleaned up an inked...

AGH BUT IT'S SO CONFUSING!
Life death, concious?
Gosh... heh. Really neat...
(Seriously that girl looks like me..)
But confusing *nods*
As for the uninked one with the orbs, I found that a wee bit funny... Just me opinion though.

Okay good carry on

this is a really cool little comicstrip thing, i like the idea and, i really am waiting for the next part, this is cool.

inked = lovely.

That one was well written as well as well drawn. Well well well.
I like where the stories goin, with the girl being his sub conscience. And its a good original look at post-death experiences. Something I'm quite a fan of myself. You wisely choose the pictures in each box, or "shots" if you will. It so much better than having two people in static poses with speech bubbles above their heads. You are off to a good start, and after many more, and years of experience, I can see you starting a solid book. Once again, the offer is still on the table about getting together and co-producing a strip with really in depth storyline/s, and solid realistic characters. I've tried my hand at comics in my time, my best one was called Blank Stare, I made like six, but I've lost them.

So, ya ya, keep it up. My MSN crapped out for some reason, talk to you soon maybe.

spiffy. I cant wait to see what comes of this guys mind.
REad my pickle story pleeeease. Everyone ignores me.

No comic today, working hard on new site.
Check it out at www.skyweb.comicgenesis.com, itll soon move to www.WorstOfAll.tk
So check out some time.

Just so instead of me posting my stuff here and like 4 other forums, just check and book the site.

Site is in alpha by the way, theres like nothing but the comic there.

hey great comic but when I click on your links I just get a blank page?

try it again
Ive got it hooked up
www.worstofall.tk

Wow I love them! They're strange, and seam all.. I can't really discribe it... Misty?

I can't wait to see what happens next!