Well... it's a girl.

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My last piece of art done by 14-year-old me.
I'll be 15 in less than half an hour! :D
Not a well-drawn piece, but its a free-hand drawing after all.
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I'll be attempting to draw my impression of Nate, wisemann210 & Nutty soon.
All in the similar style which I drew Jiggity.
*cackles evilly*
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*super gasp!*
Why does the girl's face resemble Nick Jonas by the slightest bit?!
GAH.
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It's good!

But her other boot was crooked. The only way it could have been that way in real life would be as if she broke her ankle.

I don't think her ankle is broken.

Other than that, I liked it! And she likes music too. :D Awesome job!
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Sweet drawing. You're really good. I wish I could draw like that.
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Wow, that's pretty cool. ^_^ The only thing I can say is, her legs look a little thin. I think it's the lines- they make them look a little scrawny.

Otherwise, it's great! I wish my doodles looked like that. ><;

I'll be attempting to draw my impression of Nate, wisemann210 & Nutty soon.


Woo! Hehe. ^_^
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I'm late, but, Happy Birthday!

Two things-

1- the headphones are not far enough down on her head. The top of the ear (as a rule of thumb) is just a little higher then the corner of the eye. The bottom of the ear is just under the nose.

2- The drumsticks don't seem to be on the same plane as the hand. We're seeing them a bit to much from the top, you know?

Other then that, great job!
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This is really nice! But, of course, I have a few teeny little details to point out.

The armpit on the left side seems too high. Also on the left side, the line of the torso is too straight. It makes it look unnatural. And, as already pointed out, the legs seem a little scrawny.

Apart from these minor nitpicks, this is really good!

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It's cool, but when you look a little closer at her arms, you see that the top is a bit weird, and the top of the arm looks a little thin. I agree with Cat_910, the ankle is a bit broken, and the legs are a little thin as well, but all in all it's a great doodle, you obviously weren't looking to be put up in a museum, so it's great. But to be nit-picky, the head-phones are up too high, and where the headphones split is a bit off, But it's great, better than I could do in a life time!
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this kind is drawing is heavily influences with western style animation and less with manga drawing

overall,
it was truly amazing.
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Hey!
Everyone's already nit-picked on this but here's something that struck me quite odd:
The face is kind of a little too chubby compared to the rest of her body. It doesn't really suit the body very well and all that, so next time try to maintain proportions.

I really loved it though, it was good!

Keep drawing!
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Erk.
Body proportions.
It always looks weird when I draw it properly. And it takes me forever to draw it properly.

*Western style animation?
I call it Meep Style.
I don't really draw manga, only some times.

Thanks for the helpful feedback everyone! :D
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This is so cute! All flaws aside, it's perfect!

It doesn't have to be precise or perfectly dimensioned. It's great as it is, very cartoonic and adorable!

Can I color this!? :D I have an urge to take it to an imaging program and fill it in. But, I want your permission first!


I absolutely lover her boots-- especially the crooked one. Good job!

Her hair and expression is so cute :D. Fabulous job, Meep!

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Umm... go ahead springrain :D
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wow, to me it doesnt even look freehanded. haha, it kind of reminds me of a computer generated drawing. i dont know. haha

so, shes a drummer. noticed from the sticks. haha, very cool. the headphones... where can i get a pair like that? and the shirt, too.

overall, i like alot!

and happy late birthday!




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This is adorable! I know, not necessarily what you were going for, but the girl in the picture just looks like she's having such a good day ^_^ And I think that's important, to communicate emotions effectively! Especially since her eyes are closed; everyone's always so preoccupied by eyes, lol. I like her hair, in particular. It has a lot of motion to it without being overly busy. It gives it a lot of personality.

Some things I noticed:
- The area between the girl's right arm and her back looks a little one-dimensional with the straight line of her back and the thinness of her (upper) arm, and the thumb and pinkie of that hand don't quite match up with the rest of the fingers in terms of motion patterns.

- The necklace gets caught up in her hair and the headphone cord, making that part very complicated while the rest of her is much more clean-lined. Similar with the shading on the ipod.

I look forward to seeing your impressions of yws-ers! :D




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Alright, so basically with this one, I was very unsure of how I was in a way, supposed to take it.

Of course, after looking at it a couple more times, I realised I really like this piece.

It's very cartoony and cute, and although normally my proportionwise side would kick in right about now, I must admit I really didnt care that the legs were a little two small, or the earphones were pointing in this direction too much. In a sense, I think that really worked out in making the piece good. The fact that it was cartoony and strange made it interesting and appealing to the eye.

Keep up the wicked drawing and I hope to see more from you in your 15th year of life! (yes that is in a sense saying happy birthday).
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