If I Were To Lay To Rest

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To the reader,
this is the first thing I've posted here on YWS so I thought I should post something honest. This is an entry I once put in my journal when a friend of mine past away.


If I Were To Lay To Rest
I’d get to my knees and ask forgiveness to those I’ve hurt - if I’ve caused anyone self-doubt I’d ask you to believe, believe in yourself and be strong in your strengths.
If I’ve broken your heart trust that it was unintentional.
If we’ve drifted apart know I’ve always thought of you and wish you the best.
And to those of you I wasn’t brave enough to show my true love and affection for - know I regretted it.
To my mother and father I send you a million hugs I neglected to give due to my comfort zones limitations.
To my brothers I say “I love you” and the pride I have for all of you was reflected in every smile that lit my eyes.
I’d thank God - for taking my sins upon the cross, for guiding me through life and giving me strength and faith when all was lost.




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I LOVE it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It's really awesome!!!
I love the last part!!!!
And I love God so much, so that part was really really good! =]]
It's cool, even though it's not really rhyming or anything.
which I don't think is a bad thing at all. hehe.
I think it's really deep=]




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I appreciate the comment, thanks=]



she slept with wolves without fear, for the wolves knew there was a lion among them.
— r.m. drake