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Hello all! Seeing as how my Star Wars storybook fell through in the first two days, here's another one.


You are one of a few in the world who has an incurable disease. That is, until you meet someone from what are supposed too be myths and fairytales. They promised you happiness for your disease is known by and shunned by all. They promised you eternal life for just commiting what humanity you have left. If you don't join them, you will surely die. Either by the disease or by them...


So, here we go.

Rules: No god modding, no swearing and cursing beyond what is "over the top," romance is allowed but no sex, no killing of other characters unless it is approved by both the writer and I.

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History:
Disease: (make one up or choose an incurable one from known history)


So yeah that's it in a nutshell. However, the above was just the overall plot. More can be made up as long as everyone knows what's happening and when.
"So, I was thinking, I've always wanted to ride a TaunTaun."
"Ummmm....I asked you answer the math problem on the board."
"No you didn't."
"Yes I did."
"Yeah well, that's your opinion."...............A conversation between my teacher and I.




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Name: Taylor Pecereno
Age: 14
Gender: male
Personality: calm. and quick witted, he makes jokes at the wrong times a lot and constantly puts his foo in his mouth he also does not hide his anger for towards someone
Looks: he has longish blond hair and bright blue eyes. He looks like a skater and his medium height. very handsome
History: He lived a normal kids life not much stood out in it.
Disease: He has a new disease called Didiateus




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Name: Selen

Age: 17

Gender: Female

Personality: She is sweet, shy, and untrusting.

Looks: Image

History: Her family abandon her when she was 5 when they found out she was sick.

Disease: Subero, it's where she goes blind and acts crazy every now and then randomly
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Name: Seran
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Personality: Cynical and wary. A loyal soul, if he would be given a chance to prove it. Refuses to give up his pride, even as others sneer and spit at him.
Looks: Tall, dark haired, with very dark eyes. Thin, as he never gets enough to eat. Sallow skin, dark rings under his eyes. If healthy, wouldn't be too bad looking, but as he is, he merely looks sickly. Keeps skin completely covered. Purple mark across his cheek- a trademark of his disease.
History: His parents died from a combination his disease and another illness, they were shunned and feared, refused treatment for their treatable illness. He was turned out onto the streets.
Disease: Lytetha. (made up... lol) Sensitivity to sunlight, periodic paralyzation, occasional loss of vocal funtion. Purple marks across the skin.
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Name: James Lestat

Age: 18

Gender: male

Personality: He is a lonely person, And prefers to be on his own and have time to think. He is clever but has unrealised potential.

Looks: http://www.geocities.com/le_lioncourt/m ... estat2.jpg

History: James was born in the twon of Forks were he grew up with his mother and sister, Cathrine and Lucy. When James was 16 he moved away from his family to go to college to take music and history part time.

Disease: Porphyria (The Vampire Disease)

It has been long believed that the condition associated with vampire legends is porphyria. Vampire characteristics are similar to those of porphyrics and this may have led to the misconception in the early 1400-1600's that porphyria sufferers were vampires. Vampire legends are in every country and porphyria is also found throughout the world. Porphyria comes from the Greek word meaning purple.

Of course, we now know that porphyria patients are NOT vampires, but porphyria might have contributed to the origin of the vampire legends.
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Woo! We have people!


Name: Will Blackley

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Personality: Forthcoming, funny, very direct.

Looks: Short black hair, bright blue eyes, very attractive. Semi muscular body, average weight.

History: Will grew up in the city. He knows his way around the back alleys. At age 13 he suddenly became ill. It was a disease no doctor had seen before. They had found out that without a cure, Will would die at age 20.

Disease: Lupus Hemophilia (causes anger, confusion, pain, and some altering effects on the body)
"So, I was thinking, I've always wanted to ride a TaunTaun."
"Ummmm....I asked you answer the math problem on the board."
"No you didn't."
"Yes I did."
"Yeah well, that's your opinion."...............A conversation between my teacher and I.




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*Let's start*


Beep, beep, beep

The sound of a hospital monitor could be heard over the doctor's voice.

"He passed out again? This is getting worse. He's stable right now but when you brought him in, we had a hard time stopping the bleeding," the doctor leaned over Will with a flashlight and peered into his eyes. The white coat he wore seemed too bright for Will. He closed his eyes.

"Is there anything we can do?" Will recognized that voice, Will's father clung too his mother.

"I'm afraid not. We don't think he'll last the night. His disease is moving faster and faster. So far, he's the only one with it, but there is no cure. I'm sorry," the doctor said as he left the room. Will's parents sobbed.
"So, I was thinking, I've always wanted to ride a TaunTaun."
"Ummmm....I asked you answer the math problem on the board."
"No you didn't."
"Yes I did."
"Yeah well, that's your opinion."...............A conversation between my teacher and I.




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* sorry i'm dropping out :( *




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Selen:

Selen listened to the music that was in the insan asilm. She hated this place. She looked out her window and took a big breath. She was bored.

"Hey, come on, lunch time." A nurse said at the door.

"I'm not hungry." She growled.

"Listen, Crazy, you gotta come." She felt everything go black.

Selen's other side:

"When will you people learn not to call me crazy!" Selen screamed grabbing the door and yanking it open grabbing hte nurse by the neck.

"CODE PURPLE!" THe nurse managed to yell. Other nurses came and Selen threw the nurse at the turning and runing towards the entrance. She wasn't really Selen, just in Selen's body. She was a trained killer, an assassin. Course everyone just saw her as crazy. It was the deises that Selen had. Made her have another personality.
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Name: Zire

Gender: Male

Age: 19

Personality: A loyal person, funny even at deadly situations, although serious ever since he got his disease.

Looks: Before going to Insanity asylum - http://valkyrie-sorrow.deviantart.com/art/Boy-25475403

After a few years - http://hawkstudios.deviantart.com/art/G ... ne-7198665 (same face body as above though etc)

History: Lived an okay life but was admitted into an insane asylum at the age of ten because of an 'incurable disease' and has been there since.

Disease: Acolypia (A disease of temporary insanity, he goes insane at times, with emotional outbreaks screaming and an unbreakable urge for blood and murder)

*Okay?*

Zire


I watched as they ordered a code purple and pulled the innocent girl out of her cell charging her with an electric pulse designed to send electric charges to a human body to keep her unconscious for a while.

Why do they keep us here?

"Here's you food idiot" Someone called and shoved some unspeakable leftovers inside my cell.

I clenched my bound fists in order to keep my anger i place. I smiled.

I was bound for 'safety' for my 'own good' as they say, i knew they were lying, nine years in this place had given me plenty of experience, i had seen people much older and younger than me carted in here, they were mostly much more stable than me, and i had seen their dead bodies dragged out and thrown into the river near here, it was disgusting. I had survived though, thanks to my 'evil' side my side that insisted on living on with or without nutrition, the side that insisted on killing every single one of them and releasing the poor prisoners that were like me.

I looked at the bowl and then started eating, without the use of my hands. I had to eat like a dog. And that was when the man dressed in a coat and long black trousers entered my cell.

I looked up surprised. 'Surprise', that was an emotion that rarely crossed my mind, it was a nice feeling. No one came inside into my cell, i had no friends, no one to speak, i was never takeout of the cell, unlike many other prisoners.

"I'd like to make you an offer" The man said.

His voice was soft, a tone of a human voice i had not heard in years. I smiled again.

"I will..." The man continued.

"I accept!" I replied silently, anything to get me out of this place.

"Good now let us go to get another one of you, you might have seen her once or twice" The man said as he untied me.

I felt my hands and flexed hem, it had been about a week since they had untied me and it had been six and a half days since my last outburst. Three had died. I smiled and followed the man slowly.
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Are you Insane the same man asks, - "Oh yes!. The Mad Hatter being saner!"




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Selen's Other Side, We'll Call her Senra

Senra nearly screamed as the eletric shock ran through her body when she was almost out of the stupid asylum. Nearly is the key word, cause she refused to give them the pleasure of knowing she screamed. She felt herself hit the ground and she hissed. Felt them pull her up, and drag her back to a holding room, putting her in one of those stupid jump suits and then locking the door. She glared at the door way. She could feel Selen fighting for control again, but there was no way she was getting that. She was going to make sure that they got the hell otu of here.

"Hello." A voice said. She blinked and her eyes focused a little. She saw a man standing in front of her along with one of hte other 'crazies' from the asylum. She'd not seen him untied for a while. "Which of you am I talking to?"

"I'm Senra, got a problem with that?" She hissed.

"No, but I'd rather talk to Selen, she's less likely to slit my throat." He replied with a smile. She glared and Selen fought harder to get out.

"She's kinda busy right now." Senra hissed.

"Let her out, Senra." The man said. Senra growled but let Selen have control again.

Selen

Selen looked at the man in front of her.

"Hello, Selen." He smiled.

"What do you want?" She asked. He leaned against the wall and looked at the guy with him. SHe'd noticed him a few times, but not to many. Senra ran a few images through her head reminding her of other tiems their eyes had seen him that she wasn't there for.

"I want to offer you a deal." He replied.

Don't take it, he's probably perverted. Senra hissed.

"What is it?"

"It'll get you out of here." He replied.

When we get out, if he is perverted I'll let you take over. She told Senra.

"I'm in." She smiled.

"Good, now let's get you untied. Please don't let Senra take over cause I have a feeling she is out of blood right now." He smiled as he untied her.

"She's always out of blood."

AM NOT!
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Will's parents soon left too go home and make funeral preparations. Wow, shows how much they care, Will thought. It had been a while since he tried too walk. He started too get up when the doctor came in.

"Will, you need too lay down. I have some horrible news. You're parents were in an accident on the way home. They didn't make it. I'm so sorry," the doctor said, "But there is another visitor here too see you."
"So, I was thinking, I've always wanted to ride a TaunTaun."
"Ummmm....I asked you answer the math problem on the board."
"No you didn't."
"Yes I did."
"Yeah well, that's your opinion."...............A conversation between my teacher and I.




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We walked into the room and the man dismissed the doctor who walked out of the room angry.

"Hello Will" The man said smiling as he had when speaking to us.

I wasn't afraid anymore and i had no doubts. The man was recruiting us, for a larger cause. We were all the same, people who wanted revenge, people who wanted to be cured, people who were destined to live their lives i sickness or die in a destined time. We were all the same. Hopeless, innocent, strong enough to live our lives knowing we would die at any time or had to suffer for the rest of our lives.

This man... he was different, i could not hear his heartbeat, he was kind and knew how we felt, he wanted to help us as he had said, he was not afraid of us or disgusted to touch us or help us. He was... a friend, he was our savior, if what he said was true.

"Who are you?" The boy, Will asked.

I saw from his eyes that his parents didn't care for him, he was like us too, but he... he hadn't suffered yet, not like we had at least.

"He looks to me as one of us" I whispered to Selen.

She kept silent, as usual, she didn't try to talk with me and t was bugging me, after about nine years of being in a cell with no company it would have been nice to talk to someone who understood me and had suffered like me. I sighed and saw her looking at me suddenly.

"He better be" She whispered to me and smiled slightly.

I smiled back, thankful and happy, something i hadn't felt in several years. I hadn't felt many things in the last nine years and now feeling all these emotions were fueling my other side. I took a deep breath to calm it down.

"Don't worry, fight it for a little more time" Said the man to me suddenly, then looked back to Will "I have an offer to propose to you"

*Okay?*
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Are you Insane the same man asks, - "Oh yes!. The Mad Hatter being saner!"



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