Niiiiice! These are a lot better than the first ones . And so pretty, too! I think my favorite would be number 3.
Also! Your features are too sharp to just do a standardized black-and-white edit, you know? You should soften it a few times-- select the face and soften it twice at least-- and then put a soft blur on the rest of the pictures. It should come out decent .
very Modelesque though! (yah, I think I just made that word up...)
Fabulous!
June
EDIT: The way I said that about features sounds so harshly rude XD. I'm sorry! I'm not saying your features as in what you look like, I'm saying that the eyes and nose have very contrasting surroundings. Sorry if I sounded rude
"I'd steal somebody's purse if I could google it and then download it." -- Firestarter
I like the last one best, it shows more emotion where in the others, the two people appear a little cold. Try showing some emotion next time, sadness, or something. The first pic, they appeared a little stuck up to tell you the truth, if this and you and your friend, sorry, but it does appear that way. I like the look, the colors and how the neckless is bright, the neckline is bright and the blond girls hair is very pretty the way you did the shadows. I like the second one where she is looking away is very good to, perhaps they could both look away from the camera in another one? Cool, keep it up.
Feel the urge to give some constructive criticism? Why not give it to these stories?
I really liked the last one because like Scorpia said, they show more emotion.
I admire the poses, they look really comfortable but like they could also be in a magazine.
. And so pretty, too! I think my favorite would be number 3.
