Who I Am

Heart beating. Chest heaving.

A scarred face looks back from the water. A torn soul shows in its eyes. Those can't be my eyes!

Phoenix. They name me for one of their legends. But it isn't my name. Doesn't anyone remember Avari Tigersong?

They mean well, but I am sick of good intentions. They don't understand; they never will.

Does anyone remember Avari?

who is that avari???
i dont know who that is

Hi there Stori,

This is a very nice piece, I'd just like to make one suggestion.

Maybe you should switch:

Doesn't anyone remember Avari Tigersong?

with:

Does anyone remember Avari?

It would add an ending of desperation as though he were saying: "Doesn't anyone remember me?"

Anyway, I hope the suggestion helped.

Have a good one!