I like it. It was really nice! One small fix you could make was the arms. They look disproportioned near the bottom. Also the necks were like giraffes. Otherwise it was really pretty!
and an interesting concept.
See you around!
Xx Forever Threnody
“One sees clearly only with the heart. Anything essential is invisible to the eyes” ~ The Little Prince~
First thoughts:
WOW!! In MS Paint?? Man, that's a brilliant effort. Did you use a tablet? If no, I would suggest you to try them, since you're obviously talented.
I love the eyes for the 2nd one, it's really nice.
I don't quite get the picture, but I'm guessing it has something to do with racial harmony... I guess. What is it, anyways?
The necks are long-ish, not very appealing.
You should've cropped the bottom of the picture by about 2cm, so that the hands don't end in this weird amputated limbs sort of thing. Or is it meant to be that way??
The last one's hands are missing, or not seen, and it feels somewhat weird, or is that also meant to be?
Loved it! I really hope you try out stuff on photoshop and use a tablet, they would look astounding, I'm sure.
~Lava
~ Pretending in words was too tentative, too vulnerable, too embarrassing to let anyone know. - Ian McEwan in Atonement
Wow, for paint this is pretty good. Whenever I draw on paint it looks like... not so nice. I'll stick to my pencils and paper ^_^.
Critique:
-Why is there a giant blob in the middle of the picture?
-They have no hands! It looks like their arms got cut off.
-Why are there blue dots on one girl's face?
-The necks are too long.
Good job!
Hope this helped,
Sakura
Odi et amo. quare id faciam, fortasse requiris? nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior. -Catullus, Carmen 85
Darn, Haruno Sakura took my words away. Except I think there ARE hands. You know, under the red part of the second girls hair (peace symbol, right?) \/.
So, good attemp at art considering you used paint. Actually, clap clap clap.
I never seem to review anything of yours, and I don't know why! *makes mental note to review more of your work*
I'm not going to lie-- you have talent! You did this on microsoft paint, freehand? Wow! You did a very good job especially if you used a mouse.
Really, I can't draw on Paint to same my life, lol.
Also! I want to suggest this program! You can download it free here at the site:
http://www.photofiltre.com/
It's a lot like paint in the sense that you can draw the same way and such, but then it has a lo of basic tools such as blur, antialias, sharpen, and so on, so that after drawing you can tweak the art to look a bit more realistic. Before, I used to draw on paint, save it, and open it up in photo filtre so that I could practice on it.
But, you did a really good job! I like how the last one has red-and-black hair. That's cool!
Great job, Voxina!
June
"I'd steal somebody's purse if I could google it and then download it." -- Firestarter
