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Believing is just the Beginning…

‘If you can see the magic in a fairytale, you can face the future.’-Danielle Steel.
Who have not read fairytales? We all have had the experience of revelling in the beauty and innocence of fairytales. May it be Cinderella or Sleeping Beauty…fairytale is a word which cannot be new to us. But have you ever travelled ages back to the earliest of times and uncovered the fascinating facts regarding these stories? Well, if not, then here are some mystical finds I discovered when I undertook this journey.
A fairytale or fairy story is a fictional tale that usually features folkloric characters (such as fairies, talking animals) and enchantments, often involving a far-fetched sequence of events. A fairytale often stars transformed princes, princesses, animals, as in “fairytale ending” where the humble but heroic princes defeat the wicked enemies or as in “fairytale romance” where after much ado the beautiful princesses marry their Prince Charming. One distinct feature of fairytales is that, they take place “once upon a time”.
The history of the fairytale is particularly difficult to trace but the oral fairytale may have existed since long. The oral tradition of the fairytale came long before the written page. The oldest known fairytales stem from ancient Egypt around 1300 B.C and now, after travelling through various periods of time, they have grown and matured in various aspects and have become the most popular genre of stories for young children.
The characters and motifs of fairytales are recurring and simple: Princesses and goose girls, youngest sons and gallant princes, ogres, giants, wicked stepmothers, fairy godmothers, talking animals, glass mountains, witches, castles, meadows and the like. The tale traverses in an unreal world and in this never-never land humble heroes kill adversaries, succeed to kingdoms and marry the ever-beautiful princesses. W.H Auden said ‘The way to read a fairytale is to throw yourself in.’ It is very true indeed. Unless the drama…the suspense…the thrill…the magic vibrates within us, we will not be able to feel the ecstasy of reading a fairytale. So whenever you read a fairytale, imagine you are the hero/heroine and try to invoke the feel of the dramatized series of happenings, and you will be carried to a mystical land where everything will be as you want.
The most famous authors of fairytales are the Grimm Brothers (Jakob and Wilhelm) whose works include Cinderella, Hansel and Gretel, Rapunzel, Sleeping Beauty, Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs and many more; Hans Christian Anderson who wrote Thumbelina, The Ugly Duckling, The Snow Queen, The Little Mermaid to mention only a few, and Charles Perrault who wrote Puss-in-Boots, Little Red Riding Hood, Bluebeard amongst many others. The Grimm Brothers collected their tales from peasants and edited them to suit their audience; most of Perrault’s stories are retellings of old tales. But whatever may the form be, fairytales are after all fairytales!
G.K Chesterton said ‘Fairytales do not tell children the dragons exist; they tell the dragons can be killed.’ This quote has great weight…every child believes in fairies, dragons, etc. They do not need fairytales to tell them that. Instead fairytales tell that good always succeed over evil, as in Hansel and Gretel, we read how Hansel and Gretel, who are good, escape from the wicked witch. Other examples can be Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs, where we are told how Snow White, after much tragedy, at last finds bliss and triumph over her wicked step-mother. So fairytales are necessary for young minds.
Friends, as we grow up we cease to believe in these supernatural and fantasy-based characters. But as we read in the famous story ‘Pandora and the Hope Fairy’, there are loads of evil, treacheries, malevolence in this world but there also resides a fairy called Hope, because of whom we are able to survive these anxieties of life.
Fairytales are narrated to children when they are young and this is very essential indeed, for if in the launching of our lives our minds are manipulated by the beauty, innocence and the morals dwelling in these tales, we will be able to trace the optimistic side of happenings. The fairies are like our wildest dreams, which seem unreachable but we can make them plausible. Friends, in life, sometimes, believing in such mystics can lead to supreme happiness.
Well, I don’t know about you, but I do believe in fairies…and who knows, I may someday meet one because, after all, believing is just the beginning! And as J.M Barrie said, ‘When you say I don’t believe in fairies, a fairy somewhere drops dead.’ And I wouldn’t want anyone dead on my account, would you? So here I end my article…with the hope that you enjoyed reading it.
‘Deeper meaning resides in the fairytales told me in my childhood than in any truth that is taught in life.’-Johann Christoph Friederich v. Schiller




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Okay, so I really like the idea behind this piece, I found a couple quick grammatical fixes, but besides that the only suggestion I have is trying to exclude "you" and "I" from non-fiction writing. Most of the time it can easily be altered and sounds better without those words anyway.

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Sandy07 wrote:Believing is just the Beginning…

‘If you can see the magic in a fairytale, you can face the future.’-Danielle Steel. (Okay, here you'll want to but the quote in regular quotations of the...well, I'm not quite sure what they're called but regular quotations such as these "..." will do.)
Who have (change this to has) not read fairytales? We all have had the experience of revelling in the beauty and innocence of fairytales. May it be Cinderella or Sleeping Beauty… (ditch the ... and just put a comma) fairytale is a word which cannot be new to us. But have you ever travelled ages back to the earliest of times and uncovered the fascinating facts regarding these stories? Well, if not, then here are some mystical finds I discovered when I undertook this journey.
A fairytale or fairy story is a fictional tale that usually features folkloric characters (such as fairies, talking animals) and enchantments, often involving a far-fetched sequence of events. A fairytale often stars transformed princes, princesses, animals, as in “fairytale ending” where the humble but heroic princes defeat the wicked enemies or as in “fairytale romance” where after much ado the beautiful princesses marry their Prince Charming. One distinct feature of fairytales is that, they take place “once upon a time”.
The history of the fairytale is particularly difficult to trace but the oral fairytale may have existed since long. The oral tradition of the fairytale came long before the written page. The oldest known fairytales stem from ancient Egypt around 1300 B.C and now, after travelling (traveling - one L) through various periods of time, they have grown and matured in various aspects and have become the most popular genre of stories for young children.
The characters and motifs of fairytales are recurring and simple: Princesses and goose (geese?) girls, youngest sons and gallant princes, ogres, giants, wicked stepmothers, fairy godmothers, talking animals, glass mountains, witches, castles, meadows and the like. The tale traverses in an unreal world and in this never-never land humble heroes kill adversaries, succeed to kingdoms and marry the ever-beautiful princesses. W.H Auden said (again, the quotations here) ‘The way to read a fairytale is to throw yourself in.’ It is very true indeed. Unless the drama…the suspense…the thrill…the magic (go with commas here instead of ...) vibrates within us, we will not be able to feel the ecstasy of reading a fairytale. So whenever you read a fairytale, imagine you are the hero/heroine and try to invoke the feel of the dramatized series of happenings, and you will be carried to a mystical land where everything will be as you want. (This last sentence, particularly the second half, is a little weird, try to reword this.)
The most famous authors of fairytales are the Grimm Brothers (Jakob and Wilhelm) (I didn't know their first names! Awesome!) whose works include Cinderella, Hansel and Gretel, Rapunzel, Sleeping Beauty, Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs and many more (replace many more with among others) ; Hans Christian Anderson who wrote Thumbelina, The Ugly Duckling, The Snow Queen, The Little Mermaid to mention only a few, (semi-colin here) and Charles Perrault who wrote Puss-in-Boots, Little Red Riding Hood, Bluebeard amongst many others. (This last bit is a little awkward, try to reword it) The Grimm Brothers collected their tales from peasants and edited them to suit their audience; most of Perrault’s stories are retellings of old tales. But whatever may the form be, fairytales are after all fairytales! (This sentence is confusing. It might be better to have it say "after all fairytales are fairytales," but even still you may want to switch it to something along the lines of "after all fairytales are fiction" or "magical" or something along those lines for some word variation.)
G.K Chesterton said ‘Fairytales do not tell children the dragons exist; they tell the dragons can be killed.’ This quote has great weight… (replace ... with commas) every child believes in fairies, dragons, etc. They do not need fairytales to tell them that. Instead fairytales tell that good will always succeed over evil,(end this sentence here and then begin make the Hansel and Gretel seperate) as in Hansel and Gretel, we read how Hansel and Gretel, who are good, escape from the wicked witch. Other examples can be Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs, where we are told how Snow White, after much tragedy, at last finds bliss and triumph over her wicked step-mother. So fairytales are necessary for young minds. (Maybe this is why fairytales are necessary for young minds?)
Friends, as we grow up we cease to believe in these supernatural and fantasy-based characters. But as we read in the famous story ‘Pandora and the Hope Fairy’, there are loads of evil, treacheries, malevolence in this world but there also resides a fairy called Hope, because of whom we are able to survive these anxieties of life.
Fairytales are narrated (told, passed on, recited?) to children when they are young and this is very essential indeed, for if in the launching of our lives our minds are manipulated by the beauty, innocence and the morals dwelling in these tales, we will be able to trace the optimistic side of happenings. The fairies are like our wildest dreams, which (change which to they) seem unreachable but we can make them plausible. Friends, in life, (just start this sentence with "sometimes) addressing the reader as friends is "unprofesh" as they say) sometimes, believing in such mystics can lead to supreme happiness. (Besides that first bit-- I really like this sentence!)
Well, I don’t know about you, but I do believe in fairies…and who knows, I may someday meet one because, after all, believing is just the beginning! And as J.M Barrie said, ‘When you say I don’t believe in fairies, a fairy somewhere drops dead.’ And I wouldn’t want anyone dead on my account, would you? So here I end my article…with the hope that you enjoyed reading it. (Ditch this sentence) ‘Deeper meaning resides in the fairytales told me in my childhood than in any truth that is taught in life.’-Johann Christoph Friederich v. Schiller


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