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A contemporary novel, eh? Good luck with writing something like that, mate. I have had trouble writing one of my own, though it's a tad bit different from yours, obviously. I wouldn't suggest writing it down here in the Writer's Corner, next time, however. If you want to post the novel, post it in the Advanced Critiques section and people like myself will make time to read it and give you a review for it.

Otherwise, I'm curious to hear more of the story. PM me once you post it up.

Thank you for your reply Krupp. I'll keep working on this. I may change the first chapter a little and finish it. I just didn't get you opinion on my text. Did you like it or was is totally crap? I'll PM you once I post some more of the novel as you asked.

Thanks,

Don't. Don't start the novel with a prologue that explains what the novel is about. The novel should explain what the novel is about.