Welcome Home, Jellybean: A boy struggles to be a good brother to his mentally retarded older sister, while at the same time keeping her from messing up his life.
Elsewhere: strangers go to haunted house and try to release the ghost in the house with deadly effects.
Our Reality (Mine): Woman realized that the world is not real.
John McClane: Drop it. It's the police. Tony: You won't hurt me. John McClane: Oh, yeah? Why not? Tony: Because you're a policeman. There are rules for policemen. John McClane: Yeah. That's what my captain keeps telling me
Xavier's Quest: Boy must find his way home after stumbling through a portal into another world. Kalu, Newborn Spirit: Newborn animal spirit must discover what he is and save the forest while he's at it.
Jurassic Park: An entrepreneur and his scientists bring dinosaurs back to life, starting a theme park.
"Jesus said to her, “I am the resurrection and the life. The one who believes in me will live, even though they die; and whoever lives by believing in me will never die. Do you believe this?” -John 11:25-26
Secondary (mine)-- A girl discovers a parallel universe where the other half of her soul is slowly dying, and she must find a way to save her in order to save herself.
"Let's eat, Grandma!" as opposed to "Let's eat Grandma!": punctuation saves lives.
Hold Still: A girl must cope with her best friend's suicide
I am nothing but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's or maybe like pocket candy that's just a bit too sweet.
Space Elephants: "Her body numbs as he approaches the door."
I owe everybody who gives me feedback one critique on a fiction work of their choice. Just give me a pm with a link and I'll critique whatever fiction piece you want.
The Falline Story- Book One: It's about the lives of four deputies of Falline, how a rebellious deputy of Falline is changed to a good man by the woman he rescued from outlaws, and how her death by childbirth ruined his life.
“Take one fresh and tender kiss Add one stolen night of bliss One girl, one boy, some grief, some joy Memories are made of this.” Johnny Cash
