Senseless

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Warning: I am not a singer and decided to sing anyway...I know, it's terrible haha. Basically it's a song i had a dream about last night that I wrote this morning at 4am. Me singing and my sister doing the beats. It's a pretty personal song to me. I had a lot of fun singing obnoxiously as well as writing it. Hope you enjoy it as much as I did :P


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tuMemTqQbYI << the singing



The Lyrics :

Senseless

If I were damned to misery
Torment, lies, I’d easily
Come down to levels not so low but far enough
To let you know.
Oh careful honey, not too fast
Apologies have long gone passed
I need for this lesson to last

Kinda Chorus:
If I were blind, I feel I’d still see you here
In my mind.
You were always finding asylum,
Inside my kingdom, oh you’re so dumb
I can’t heal the numb.

Come burn my ashes set at sea,
Come taste my lips right after he did.
I cannot believe
That you would care to rescue me.
You’re not the boy that you once were
Oh please stop trying to concur
Baby will you ever learn
That I will never be like her?

Kinda Chorus:
If I were deaf
I’d have your voice left.
Just behind closed doors,
Telling me that I’m a lie,
We never should have shared one body.

Go on why don’t you take your cut?
Your eyes are hard your words are blunt.
You have me here, always unarmed
Or should you hope that I’m not lying.
You’re nothing but an instigator,
Rowl me up and beat me later.
Promises aren’t worth a cent
When you can’t breath without consent.

Kinda Chorus:
If I were mute, I could repeat every promise back to you.
Let me try, oh I remember that one
I said I loved you and you said so do I.

Your stagnant aura has left me senseless.
Better luck tomorrow, I will just end this.
Because the pain is always sweeter on the other side.
I’ll just leave you with that goodnight.
Forever. Goodnight forever. Goodnight forever. Goodnight forever.

Oh if I could hear if I could speak
If I were there If wasn’t weak
If I could taste if I could smell
If your body didn’t resemble the deepest hell.
Oh if I could see if I could feel
If I could know that you were real
If I could touch if I could see,
If I could hear, if I could speak.
I love, love.
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Wow, dark and real on several levels, (I can hear Birthday Massacre singing it).

I love it.

In places it sort of hic-uped on me, but the flow is brought back in those instances, so I don't think there is anything to point out except that it was awsome.



My humanity is bound up in yours, for we can only be human together.
— Bishop Desmond Tutu