Meep wants her money back to buy a Cheeseburger!

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*Edward is in one of his uber mushy lovey-dovey moods again*

Ed: Oh sweet Bella, the love of my life, the air that I breathe, the lighthouse for my lost boat, the cherry on my sundae, my darling sweetie pie cuddly bear cutie wutie honey wunny bunny lovey wuvey Belly welly…

Bella: Oh Eddykins, my…

Meep: If you start ranting on about sappy stuff like Cullen did, I swear I will strangle you.

Meyer: Hey…who’s this intruder in my story?

Meep: A disgruntled reader who wants her refund or she’ll unleash hell in your story.
*stomps over to Bella and Edward who are glued at the lips*

Meep: Bella, you idiot. This is a G-rated story, no kissy faces are allowed here!
*slaps Bella with a dead fish*

Ed: You can’t to that to my-

Meep: If you say anything with excessively sweet references to Bella, I will kick you where it really hurts.

Ed: *looks at Meep uncertainly* Uhh…You can’t do that to my… honey pie?

Meep: Wrong answer! *Proceeds to knee Edward in the said place*

News reporter: Breaking news! Due to a severe injury in his reproductive organs, Edward Cullen has become infertile and the birth of Renesmee will not come through!

Meep: *snickers evilly*

Bella: Nooooo! EddyWeddy!!! *rushes over to Edward*

Edward: Ouch, that bleeping hurt! (Due to the G-rated content of this script, cursing is replaced with ‘bleep’)

Bella: How could you do this to my babycakes, sweet pea-

Meep: How would YOU like to become infertile as well?

Bella: *bawls annoyingly* Now that we don’t have Renesmee, Breaking Dawn can’t exist!!!

*In the distance, Meep hears anti-Twilighters rejoicing*

Bella: Why do you hate us so much?

Meep: It’s not just you. Meyer just refuses to give me my money back. I could have used my money for three perfectly good cheeseburgers. Plus, I’m sick and tired of hearing girls gush over a fictional vampire who will never exist.

Meyer: Damn. Now that Edward is infertile, I am forced to betroth Bella to Jacob Black.

Meep: I just want my cash back, dammit!

Jacob: Bells baby! Come to Jakey!

Bella: Uhh… okay. *walks over to Jacob’s side*

Edward: Nooooo!!! Bella, don’t go!!! Remember all the good times we had? Like when I stalked you 24/7?

Jacob: *does victory dance* In your face, bloodsucker!

Edward: I have no more reason to live… *hobbles off to the Volturi, still clutching his injury*

Meyer: Oh dear, this is all a mess. There’s no love rivalry in this story now…
Oh I know! I’ll put Meep in as a rival for Jacob’s affections!

Meep: What the hell?!?!

Meyer: Jacob, meet Meep. Meep, meet Jacob. *Bella looks on, glaring*

Jacob: Sup?

Meep: Go and die, you stupid puppy. *turns to Bella* You can have him.

Bella: Really? *beams*

Meep: Yes, you can have him… dead. *stabs Jacob in the chest with pen*

Jacob: I can’t die, I heal fast!

Meep: *stabs Jacob in the head* Now look what you’ve done! What am I supposed to do with red ink?

Bella: Nooooo! Widowed twice in one day!

Meep: You have to be married to be widowed, you twit.

Meyer: What?! Another guy killed? I’ll have to replace him with someone suitable again…

Meep: Then I’ll just kill-

*A heavenly dude descends from up above, it is the YWS God.*

Nate: Meep! Stop this nonsense *takes a bite out of his cheeseburger* immediately!

Meep: *spots cheeseburger* Mmmm….cheeseburger… *drool*

Nate: Even if you didn’t like the story, and wasted your money on the book rather than buy a cheeseburger like me, you shouldn’t wreck havoc in it! Respect our fellow writers!

Meep: B-but…she doesn’t qualify to be an author-

Nate: No buts, Meep. Do as I say.

Meep: Fine.

Meyer: *eyes Nate* Hmm…he’s kind of cute…I know! Bella shall fall in love with Nate!

Nate: What?! No way!!! You better stay away from me, Meyer. I've got a cheeseburger and I'm not afraid to use it!

Meep: Still want me to respect her?

Nate: I’ve changed my mind. Let’s get out of here before she gets me! *beams Meep and himself back up to heaven*

Meep: Aww man! I bleeping still haven’t bleeping got my money back!
Bleep.

*In the background, die-hard Twilight fanatics attempt to assasinate Meep*
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HaHa. That was the funniest thing I have seen all day. :D

Bella's going to fall in love with Nate? *starts cracking up*
Woho!

*A heavenly dude descends from up above, it is the YWS God.*

Nate: Meep! Stop this nonsense *takes a bite out of his cheeseburger* immediately!


You stole my lines! Nate was eating a breakfast sandwich in mine! :D
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Sorry, I felt like having a cheeseburger while I was writing this XD
One of those random writing impulses I get every once in a while :)
Glad you had a good laugh.
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I must say, this was one of the funnier Twilight-bashing stories I've seen.

Nate totally is a fangirl magnet. At least he exists. And he brought us YWS! Nate: 2 Edward: epic fail!

Actually, I obsess over characters that aren't real either (*sigh* Mr. Darcy... *ahem*) but it's what Edward's character is that makes me dislike him.

Anyway, funny stuff. Nate had better watch his back. *eyes cheeseburger* Though, seriously, that must be one expensive cheeseburger you want... I mean, books are, what? $20? Was yours hardcover?

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Haha! Oh my gosh! This was some funny stuff!

Thank you so much for killing Edward. But Jacob, well, I'm a little sad about that. Guess I'll just have to find some other hot character to obsess over! :lol:

This is so random! Nate is awesome!

Haha! And Edward being infertile! That made me laugh so much!!! Someone should have kneed him so Renesmee wasn't born. I mean, come on! And why would she be Jacob's imprint? Anyways...Getting off topic! :)

You said you were going to keep this G, right? One mistake. You used "What the hell?" Unless that is becoming a common word and people don't mind saying it. (I personally don't.)

Yup...So great job. I am in no way offended by your Twilight bashing, because surprisingly, I am becoming a anti-Twilight fanatic. Yes, I was once in LOVE with it. Still a good book though...GAH! Getting off topic again! :roll:

Great job on the script! I would love to see this acted out! That would be funny!

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This story is very funny and I haven't read a page of Twilight in my life. I like the part where Bella says 'Noooooo!!! Widowed twice in one day', that part is hilarious. I love anti-Twilight stories. Still laughing. Also another idea could've been to throw things that Mormons are against because Stephanie Meyer is a mormon from what I think I read.
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Hahahahaha!! That was the funniest script I have ever read! Why didn't you just kill Bella? All of the series' problems would be solved if Bella were dead. But even so, you did kill Edward and Jacob which will save a lot of people from having to listen to their friends incessantly talk about Twilight. And it will save us from having to watch three more Twilight movies which will not be anywhere near as good as the books!! Yay!
My favorite part was when Edward became infertile. Hahaha! "Now that we don’t have Renesmee, Breaking Dawn can’t exist!!! *In the distance, Meep hears anti-Twilighters rejoicing*"
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This is probably one of the funniest Twilight based scripts I've read. I used to like Twilight, but you're so right about how tiring it's getting listening to people praise it, especially since it was only an OK book. One little thing though:

shouldn't wreck havoc in it!


I'm an amateur editor, but I think you meant wreak. Oh, another thing. Someone already brought this up, but you swore quite a lot for something "G rated", and I'm not sure how rating appropriate kneeing Edward so hard it makes him infertile is.
Great job! It was really funny and I wish that's what would happen to the characters!
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Lmao. Amazing. Genius. Fantastic.
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Meyer: *eyes Nate* Hmm…he’s kind of cute…I know! Bella shall fall in love with Nate!


Crack! :lol:


I've got a cheeseburger and I'm not afraid to use it!


Triple crack! :lol: :lol: :lol:


GryphonFledgling wrote:Nate totally is a fangirl magnet.


A new crack! :lol:


:D


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Ha ha! Meep you should get impulses more often! I love reading your hilarious scripts!
Meyer's character was completely hilarious! And yours as well! :D
Gold star to Meep!
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Win. :lol:

My only suggestions: 1. Make Meyer have an uber-inflated ego. I mean, as arrogant as flippin' possible, even compared to how conceited she's already portrayed as. 2. Show subtle evidence that Meyer is on something (preferably something illegal :D ).

Got to make the character true to form, right? :]
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lol, Meep, that was completely priceless! I actually laughed out loud when the, and I quote, "YWS God" descended. It was so funny. Personal favourite was when Edward went off to the Volturi. So brilliant. And mmm... cheeseburgers. I want one!

Seriously, m'dear, epic win. I don't know why it is that Twilight parodies are so funny. I'm quite compelled to write one myself after reading yours and Winter's, and I think Snoink wrote these two into a story a while back too.

Epic.

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Mmmm...
I'm sitting in front of the computer,eating brownie batter.....
Thay was soooo funny!
Even for me,the diehard Twilight Fan.
Poor Nate.
edward and Bella should go to heck.
Team Jacob!!!
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That... was... awesome! With a capital A-W-E-S-O-M-E! I was reading it, and chuckling.... And the YWS God? *laugh out loud* that was great. Much agreed. The money I put towards those books could've been used to buy me a burger. Not a cheese burger 'cause I don't like cheese... but a burger. And maybe fries...

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