The fact that this is sideways takes away a lot from the photo; it kind of makes it hard to focus.
There's something about having such high contrast black and white here that steals so much from what the original photo might have looked like. It's almost too empty to be appreciated.
I would say, next time focus a bit on keeping some other detail-- at least the shoes or the feet . If you see, the area near the head has TOO much detail compared to the too little bit of detail at the feet.
Keep it up xxJune
"I'd steal somebody's purse if I could google it and then download it." -- Firestarter
thanks for the advice!
quick question, though: how do I put multiple pictures up? I had a few others I was hoping to get some input on, but I just can't figure out how to get more than one picture posted.
You can only put one attachment per post, so you could either reply on this thread and attach another or use a photo host site like photobucket or imageshack where you can upload and put them here .
"I'd steal somebody's purse if I could google it and then download it." -- Firestarter
These pictures are fantastic, but I agree with springrain2693 on the first one, it's definitely needs to be the other way instead of sideways.
Then for the second one, if you could crop the bottom a bit to show less jeans then it would really make the photo look more nostalgic and less like you're playing dress up. You don't have to crop much, just a little to show less of the left (my left looking at the pic) leg.
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I like the second one! It's much better than the first! It's your choice to crop it or not. Either way, it's good.
I like the pose you have there . It's cute! I think the lack of color in this came out SO much better than the first simply because you left some color in there. Good job on that! And keep it up!
xxJune
"I'd steal somebody's purse if I could google it and then download it." -- Firestarter
I really like the first one, but I do agree that it should be rotated. You are really pretty xD really, really pretty.
I love the contrast between teh black and white, I really like how the jeans are dark, and then there's this one white spot on the knee the hat rocks too. I like the pose on the second one, and I think it would look nice if you used some antique effect on it. You know, to make it look that strange sort of yellow-ish colour but yet not yellow If you get me. The pose looks really cool though, and the hat compliments it well.
I love them and you are so pretty x
-I hate to be a broken record, but the picture really does need to be rotated.
-I normally love black and white, but the contrast here is much too high. I think that is because of the white background. I can barely see your nose.
Second picture:
-I like this one a lot better. -Contrast is nice
-I like how it looks sort of blurry.
-your hat=amazingness
-Sakura
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