The Night Club (Curious Fangs)

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Selen:

Selen rubbed her hair and took a deep breath. She watched as a cute guy walked in through the door. Sin walked back over cleaning off a glass.

"You sure you don't need help? It would give me something to do and I know how to mix drinks up." She replied glancing back towards the guy who started walking over. He had a guaitar slung over his shoulder.

**Tears, it's short**

Colton:

When she walked back over he held his hand out and she took it tenitivly. "Why are you nervous?" He asked.

"Your a vampire!" She said in a low voice.

"Yes, but I mean you no harm." He replied as he led her to the dance floor and then started dancing to the music being careful to let her know she was free to leave whenever she wanted.
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Sin

I looked over at Selen. I flashed her a smile.

"Only if you think you can handle it Doll Face." I smiled.

"I CAN handle it." She replied.

"Then step right up and be ready to become a barmaid." I grinned.

I opened up from behind the bar and let her come in, I did need help but hell, it was my first night and since Blake wasn't going to be much help, hell. I looked around, where was Blake? Where was Ballow? I let out a harsh breath and looked over at Selen.

"Do you want to get the drinks or clean out some glasses?" I asked.


Blake

I looked up at him. I tried really hard to not be afraid. I wasn't afraid of anything. I was an FBI agent, and part time vampire killer, great, right? NO. Not great. I wasn't holding my breat, I looked around the bar, saw other vampires with humans. I wanted to puke. I could feel the handcuffs in my back pocket, sinking.

"I'm not afraid of you." I managed to get out.

"Then why are you shaking?" He asked calmly.

"I'm not shaking." I lied raising up my chin.
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Colton:

"Your a horrible liar." He said lifting her hand up gently. It was shaking just barely, it was hard to notice, but he did notice.

"I don't see my hands shaking." She said stubbornly. He chuckled and shook his head.

"Well, you are, trust me on this one." He said softly. "Your a good dancer."


Selen:

Selen smiled and grabbed some glasses. "I'll help with the drinks if you need it. That way you can get to know your customers." She smiled as the guy with the guitar walked over and started talking to Sin. he was really reall cute. She hummed softly as she cleaned the glasses then mixed up some drinks giving them to the customers.

*All i had*
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Blake

"I've had practice." I said. True, but it was also a lie. I just let it slide to the middle and called it even.

"Ballerina?" He asked, still examining my hand.

I let out a small laugh. "Not even close." I shook my head, something caught my eye within a distance, I looked. There were two vampires, males, feeding on a human woman. I know he saw it too.
"Excuse me for like one second." I said sounding like a 13 year old. (no offence). I reached in my back pocket to find the handcuffs. The vampires who were feeding weren't paying attention, I started towards them, I talked to Sin through my mind.

"Get it out." I said to Sin.


Sin

I looked over at Blake. Then I looked over at Selen.

"Doll Face?" I asked her.

"Hmm?" She asked, getting a bottle of Whiskey.

"Has your night been boring so far?" I asked with a laugh, getting out a gun from behind the bar.

"Yeah, kind of." She said, not looking me in the eyes.

"Well, it's about to get interesting." I laughed. She didn't looked too amazed when I brought
out a gun.


Blake

I was heading to the vampires, I could feel Colton behind me a couple of feet back. One drunken idiot grapped me by the waist and tried to kiss me bring me all the way into his chest. I pulled away and pulled his shirt forward and then shoved him back as hard as I could into the wall. I was sick of being nothing but a piece of meat.
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Sia



Feeling and looking better, Sia strolled out of the bathroom, only to stop dead in her tracks when she saw what was happening.

Two men were...were drinking a woman's blood.

"Oh my God," she whispered. Sia strolled casually out in the bar and sat down at a table. Then, under the table, she began to dial 911 with her cell phone.

She looked around to see if anybody was watching her, but all the attention was focused on the two men.

Sia felt woozy. This can not be happening.. This is not happening.

She finished dialing and put the phone up to her ear.

"911, what is your emergency?"

"Yes, I would like to repo-"

Sia stopped talking quickly. The man behind the bar was looking sharply at her.

The cell phone dropped from her hand.
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Nick

The atmosphere engulfed him in its exotic grasp. Music was playing, low and seductive. A few brave souls were swaying. It wasn't like any other club he's ever been to. There was something about the night-strung clubbers that seemed off to him. Some of their eyes were full of a desire that could only be interlaced with hunger. He had not been in there long when he noticed a girl. She was slightly tall, average height and her face held a quality that was pure and true. Beauty. But it wasn't the way her sparkling green eyes glistened that made her beautiful, it was the smile that played softly on her lips. He returned the gesture.
Behind a counter, a scrawny guy with messy brown hair. His eyes were like black diamonds glistening against the rainbow inspired lights.
"An employee? Hmm, he must know who the manager is." Nick thought, walking towards the bar.
As he approached a feeling deep inside his chest started to form. It morphed into insecurity, as if something bad was about to happen. Swallowing his guts he approached the guy.
"Hey, I'm lookin' for the manager."
"Why's that?" the guy asked. He flipped his hair, revealing the tight smirk on his face. His voice was smooth, but yet it seemed like it was apart of an inside joke.
"I...I was wondering if I could get a job here..." Nick started, gulping. Sweat was trickling down the face. This wasn't like him to hyperventilate, the only thing that was keeping him from breaking apart was the soft humming of the girl at the counter handing the glass cups to the customers.
"The name's Sin. I own this place." he said seductively, gesturing with his hands.
Eyes widened, Nick nodded and then brushed his hand through his hair. Sin winced and then a breath left his lips.
"So about the job?"
"Hmm, what's your specialty?

Sabrina

Sabrina could see many couples in the corners of the club. She could tell that some were vampires trying to sneak a drop of blood. Not knowing when to make her move, she pranced over to the bar and took a seat. She was a vampire and two humans around her. The vampire had this Punk look to him and just by the way he was talking to the guy, Sabrina could tell that he was thirsting for his blood. She could smell it rolling off of him energetic waves. Inhaling and exhaling her eyes tightened and then her stomach twisted up in knots. She's been fighting the hunger for so long and now...
"Can I help you?" a girl asked.
Sabrina turned her gaze on her and looked her up and down. She had noticed that she was eyeing the guy with the guitar on his back. Smiling sinisterly, she pointed to the vampire and said: I'll have what he's having.
"I don't believe he's...drinking anything." the girl managed, her eyes fluttering continuously. Leaning closer, Sabrina took a whiff out of the girl and whispered: Then I'll settle for a Bloody Mary.
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Sin

"Selen over there, doesn't work here. So yeah I could use an extra hand. Maybe you could take drinks to people." I looked over at Blake I felt my hand clench around the handle of the gun.


*sorry it's too short even for me, I have no idea what to do???***
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****Selen wouldn't mind working, even if just for tips, it would give her something to do. :P ****

Selen turned around to start to get what the girl ordered when Sin mixed it up fast handing the drink to the lady.

"I could've gotten it." She said.

"I know. Now I gotta go kick some people out." He replied turning and strutting towards the two men that were hunched over a girl. Selen couldn't see what they were doing.

"Serve drinks." The guy with the guitar muttered.

"You could've said that you wanted to play an instrument." She smiled. "I'm sure if you are presistant and went and talked to Sin, after he deals with those guys he might let you play." She mixed up another drink and handed it to a customer and then cleaned off another glass. This was fun.


Colton:

Colton tensed when he smelled the vampires feeding off the girl and then Blake went to go help before being grabbed by a human who was drunker then drunk. He growled and walked over grabbing the guy around the coller and drug him out the door tossing him out then walking over where Sin was walking towards the two guys.

Need help? He asked in Sin's mind.
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**OK Selen can be hired :D **


Sin

"Na, I got it, thanks for asking." I said out loud, showing him the gun. "Hey! Bloodsuckers, get the hell out of my club!" I shouted the two men got quiet, and dropped the woman, I didn't have to look at her to tell, she was dead. What an image for Blake to see. I closed my eyes.

"Blake, don't look." I ordered out loud. I thought I'd see water works.


Blake

I looked down at the blonde woman, her eyes were open and her skin was blue, yes, BLUE. I felt my eyes go completely wide, she looked like my mom. I closed my eyes tightly. Pain swelled in my chest, I couldn't breath, then anger came into my system.

"Give me the gun." I spoke to Sin through his mind.

I turned around and he tossed it to be. I raced up to one of the men and slammed him against the wall, impressed? Not really. I growled in his ear. The enitre club got quiet the music was shut off, and one of the pink girly flirty idiots screamed.

"Listen to me and listen good. If you even THINK about moving, I have enough silver bullets to blow your brains to the 15th dynasty. So I wouldn't move if I were you." I clipped handcuffs on him, not sure if they'd hold.


Sin

I had never expected Blake to do that. She was angry but she could also cry a river and drownd the world.

"What do you want me to do with him?" She asked, halling him towards me.

"Throw him outside." I said then stopped her. "Oh, and Mr.Bloodsucker was it? Never come in here again... EVER." I bit between clenched teeth.
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Selen:

Selen watched the fight, if you could call it that. Why were they calling him blood sucker. She looked at the lady sitting on the floor and her heart stopped, litterally. She couldn't breath, she couldn't think. COlton walked over, jumped across the counter and pulled her to a chair sitting her down.

"Their...your..." She couldn't finish it.

"You want me to take oyu home?" He asked in a low voice.

"N-no, no I'm fine." She replied standing up. She wasn't about to let the fact that she was probably surronded by vampires scare her. She should've figured that was what Colton was.

You sure your ok? SHe heard Colton's voice in her head. She wanted to scream.

"That didn't help." She whimpered. THen got stood straight again. "I'm fine." She walked back to the counter and started serving more dishes. Then she thought back to the lady that had orderd the 'bloody marry.' and how Sin had mixed it up. She swallowed, the lady probably really meant the blood part.


Colton:

Colton watched ehr go then hurried to where the other guy was helping throw them both out then helping move the body where it could be found and marked as unsolved homicide. He looked at the group in the club still. No one had been let out.

"Think we have enough vampires to make it so they forget all this?" He asked Sin in alow voice.


**He means by like glamoring them I guess. :P **
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Sia

Sia just sat there, her mouth open in shock. Unanswered questions floated around her head.

She stood up, and marched over to the man behind the bar.

"Where is the manager of this place?"

"Your lookin at him. What can I get you?"

Sia stared at him for a long moment, then she spoke with her voice quavering.

"I am on to what kind of bar this is. Who would have thought," Sia laughed, "That vampires actually existed. But now I see the truth, and I tend to let the police know about this." She held up her cell phone and started dialing.
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Sin

"Yeah, I think uh, we're good." I nodded I was nervious, the first damn night I open and now there's a dead girl on my floor. "Yeah, this is just the rocks on top of a mix drink." I rolled my eyes. I walked up to Blake who was staring at the body.

"Come here, baby, everything will be alright. Do you need a drink?" I asked wrapping my arm around her waist and hugging her body against me.

"Yeah, can you get me something strong?" She asked.

"How strong?" I asked.

"So strong I forget everything and die." She said. I eased her onto a bar stool.


Blake

I just wanted to go home, forget all this happened. When Colton sat down next to me. I turned to him.

"Looks like you got your answer after all." I said.

"And what might that be?" He asked.

"That's why I'm afraid of them." I said truthfully. "Look, your probably looking for someone to kill your enternity with. But I'm not her. I don't date your kind, I don't kiss you kind, I haven't even touched your kind, other than hurting them, I don't marry your kind, I don't sleep with your kind, I KILL THEM." I said.
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Sin

I laughed, an acutal hysterical laugh. I pointed to Blake who seemed not to be listening.

"FYI sweetheart, Blake is an FBI agent, she's part of the team. She knows all about vampires. And just so you know, all of the police officers know about vampire killings they happen quite often. So before you do anything STUPID, let me take that." I growled stalking towards her I grabbed her cell phone and threw it to the ground, it shattered. "Usually I'd ban a stupid person, but since your cute I'll let that one slide."
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Colton:

Colton laughed. "Don't worry about that. I'm not exactly looking to marry up or anything." He smiled.

"Then what are you doing?" She hissed.

"Well, you just confussed me, I wanted to figure you out. But in reality the only thing I worry about doing is taking care of my best friends family." He replied.

"And you are doing that here how?" She demanded. He motioned towards Selen.

"She's the only living realitive of his family." He replied. "Course, up til now she didn't know vampires exist."


Selen:

Selen mixed up drinks for people who didn't really care what had happened they just wanted to get drunk and forget life. She knew how that was. She snuk a shot of whiskey before handing Colton his bottle. He looked at her frowning.

I thought you didn't drink? He said in her head. She frowned at him and kept passing drinks out.

I think I can get one after that show. She replied to him.
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