The Night Club (Curious Fangs)

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**Okay, that is it. I am dropping out. Go ahead, be mad. I'm sick and tired of reading sugary vampire love stories. There is no plot at all! Kill off my character**
I came into this world wrinkled and ugly. And no matter how much I accumulate here, it's a short journey. I will go out of this world wrinkled and ugly. So I enjoy life.




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***i understand, Princess,***

Colton sighed and sat down putting his face in his hands. "I can't believe I did that." he sighed.

"Why?" She asked.

"Cause I should've had more control." He sighed.
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**I'm not mad princess, it's cool, chill out**

Blake

"Should've, could've, would've but you didn't." I said.

"Why Blake?" he asked.

"Because of you." I confessed. "Because I love you."
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Colton nodded. "You'll need to feed soon." He said softly. "It'll be hard."

"I don't care, I'll make do." She smiled.

"You can't be in the F.B.I anymore either." He rpelie.


***I don't know how she'd reply***
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Blake

I locked myhands behind my back and my shoulders went up a little. "Why? Why would I have to quit. Being an FBI agent is what I live for."

"Well, Blake your not alive anymore." he made it sound so final, it was final. He was right, I was dead.

"Are you angry?" I asked, keeping my tone straight. Not being shy at all.
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Colton:

"PArt of me is, yes, part of me is really happy." He sighed.

"CAn you all be happy?" She asked walking over and touching his shoulder. He looked up at her and smiled a little.

"It'll take longer then five minutes." He smiled at her. "Soon enough I will be, but I still feel really bad that I was drunk enough tonot be thinking."
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Blake

"I'm sorry, I guess I didn't want you to be lonely all eternity." I said.

"I know, but you gave up your life Blake. Your another undead person now."

"You say it like it's a bad thing." I said, looking around.

"It is!" he shouted, not looking at me.
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"Calm down." She said softly.

"I'm sorry, it's just that it is a bad thing, there is nothing good about it, there never has been and never will be." He sighed. "You have no life now."


***All I had***
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Blake

"I never really wanted a life. All I turned for was you." I replied.

"You didn't have to be a vampire for me to love you." He said pressing both hands against a wall.

"But I'd have to be a vampire not to die, or be killed." I said.
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Colton:

Colton nodded and sat back down taking a deep breath. "True." He replied. "Alright, there isn't anything I can do to change this." he got up and walked over to her pulling her face to his. "I still love you, and will for eternity."


**All I had, it's been a rough day**
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Blake

"You make it sounds so final. So all I can do is love you and you already love me." she smiled. "So what do we do for the next eternity."

"Stay away from Sin?" he asked.

"Why?"

"Because then he'll grill you and then he'll kill me."
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Colton smiled when she looked at him funny. "He would not!"

"You could tell him what happened, but it woudln't cahnge a thing." He replied. "He'll kill me! Or he'll kill Selen."

"He would not!" She hissed. Colton slouched on the couch.

"He might change her." Colton said in a hoarse voice.

"What would that be so bad?" She asked.

"There would no longer be a family line from Trent." He said softly.
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Blake

"Then wait until she has kids or something." I said throwing a pillow at him.

Colton closed his eyes. "Plase, do not give me that mental image."

"Sorry." I winced. "Well, it's gotta happen sometime!" I laughed
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"I'm worrie dhe might change her before she can just to get back at me." he sighed.

"I don't think he will." She smiled.

"I sure hoep your right." He sighed pulling her close. "I sure hope your right."
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Blake

"He won't hurt her, he's not like that. He's never turned anyone and he'll only turn the gilr he completely..... loves-" I felt my self become sick. "Nevermind, forget I said that."

**blah**
We're meant to be one
I know we are...
If I am the Sky
Then you are my star... ™



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