hmm.. you sound a bit stuck on this. maybe if you expanded a bit on the beginning of this part you'll get unstuck, or at least add more to this.
hehe, write more darn you! oh yes, are you going to use this as backstory (wait, this is still about the dad, right?) put somewhere, ot are you going to put it in Hourglass? ok, that was confusing.. aka, how are you going to use this?
