Him

I think about him all the time
I'm so happy he is mine
When I look into his eyes'
I feel the love soak into mine
When he hugs me
nothing can go wrong
I just thank the Lord that I'm in his arms


By: Sara Moll

I liked your poem. It's pretty. Short, but Pretty. I usually write poems based on guys [well a certain guy that ,stupidly, I dumped.] and they end up turning out like that. Anyways, I liked it. It was nice. There are more poems and stories to write! So keep on writing so that I can keep on reviewing!!! Please go and look at my poems , which are basically all I write because I am like crazy and just a true poet. That is the only reason I am on here. My friend told me to join because I wrote well. I am too modest to say that though. Ha Ha. Thank you for putting up with my ADD in this review. I'm not good at this stuff so forgive me.

Thank you for your feedback. My poem "It's Over" is reality. Umm I wrote that to my ex-boyfriend to break up with him and all of it was true. I started crying when I saw him later because he started acting like a jerk about it. It's not fair. Oh and that one called"I Want You Back" is what I wish I could give him now. I wrote that like last night because I was all alone at my house and I really missed him. I dedicated my life to him and there you go. That's what the poem is. I know it is really sad. All my friends almost cried when they read it. Almost all my poems are true or based on true stories that have happened in my life or someone else's that I know very well. I might not say exactly who or what I'm talking about like in my poem called "Anonymous Disaster" I am talking about the girl that basically stole my guy. You know what I mean. She flirted with him and stuff and I got mad and dumped him. BIG MISTAKE. But keep on writing and thank you soo much for reading and reviewing my poem.

-Bailey Holcomb