Drunk Driving

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This wasn't written by me, and I don't deny that.
I acquired this from an email that said to keep the message going.
I figure by posting it on yws I'm getting the message out there.
Please think about this the next time you drink, and if this poem
makes you cry like it did me then I know you will.
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I went to a party,
And remembered what you said.
You told me not to drink, Mom,
so I had a sprite instead.

I felt proud of myself,
The way you said I would,
that I didn't drink and drive,
though some friends said I should.

I made a healthy choice,
And your advice to me was right.
The party finally ended,
and the kids drove out of sight.

I got into my car,
Sure to get home in one piece.
I never knew what was coming, Mom,
something I expected least.

Now I'm lying on the pavement,
And I hear the policeman say,
the kid that caused this wreck was drunk,
Mom, his voice seems far away.

M y own blood's all around me,
As I try hard not to cry.
I can hear the paramedic say,
this girl is going to die.

I'm sure the guy had no idea,
While he was flying high.
Because he chose to drink and drive,
now I would have to die.

So why do people do it, Mom
Knowing that it ruins lives?
And now the pain is cutting me,
like a hundred stabbing knives.

Tell sister not to be afraid, Mom
Tell daddy to be brave.
And when I go to heaven,
put ' Mommy's Girl' on my grave.

Someone should have taught him,
That it's wrong to drink and drive.
Maybe if his parents had,I'd still be alive.

My breath is getting shorter,
Mom I'm getting really scared
These are my final moments,
and I'm so unprepared.

I wish that you could hold me Mom,
As I lie here and die.
I wish that I could say, 'I love you,Mom!'
So I love you and good-bye.
If I can impact one person, just one, with my writing before I die, then I've lived a great life




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Sah-weet.

I REALLY hope this was written on the kids deathbed. Thank god for alcohol, it kills people like this.
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Wow. Very emotional poem. I felt like I could connect to this because my dad was a drunk and he always drove with me in the car. I feel the girl's pain in this poem. REALLY good job. Love the rhyming! I'm glad this poem wasn't too gruesome but it still showed that the girl was dying. Once again, wonderful job. =]

Becca




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