Darken City

6 posts
User avatar
Gender Male
Points 1395
Reviews 565
Plot: In the far future, humans find a "Rosetta stone" from an alien culture. It shows them many aspects of science that they had no knowledge of. They used the lore to create a utopian society. Several years later, that society is still around.

Darken City is a haven for technology, industry and science. Humans work alongside aliens. It's not perfect; no society is. But most of the time, everyone gets along with everyone else.

Characters: Make sure you have all this information.

Name:
Age:
Race: (PM me to get approval)
Special abilities: empathy, telepathy, or just plain skills
History:
Other:

My profile.

Name: Darius Crane
Age: 25
Race: human
Special abilities: expert thief, mostly works for the highest bidder
History: Darius committed his first theft at thirteen. He found he had a talent for hiding and stealing.
Now, years later, he's a well-known outlaw.
Other:

"Fifteen hundred," I insisted.

The man snorted. "I told you, my price is twelve hundred. Take it or leave it."

"I'll take it," I said.

He smiled tightly. "I though you would. Here's how it works: I give you a hundred up front. You bring the lady to me. You get the rest of the dough. Ced?"

"I understand."




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 2374
Reviews 118
*I'm gonna make two characters if you don't mind. ^-^*

Name: Marei Anna Striker (first name pronounced Mary)
Age: 20 almost 21
Race: human
Special abilities: bad thief, though good at times.
History: She gets in trouble a lot because she loves the big stuff. Like expensive expensive. Parents are kind of dead while she has no siblings. Stealing is what she does for a living.
Other: Lots of people would pay and probable are paying for her to either be killed or bring her to their side.
Appearance?: http://kuroi1nu.deviantart.com/art/Vamp ... m-67280080

Name: Jessi Brown
Age: 19
Race: a kill-boy (technified as a 'boy' that can't stop killing)
Special abilities: assassinations. He's very good at them.
History: He tried to stop killing after thirteen years of it but it didn't work. After too long he killed his family, though they fought back and so he has many scars.
Other: hates to go out in the day unless he's paid enough to do so.
Appearance?: http://kipferl.deviantart.com/art/Vampi ... d-37088838
http://shilin.deviantart.com/art/Blackb ... t-34238426

*If they aren't good I'll edit away their post for them.*

Marei:

She ran for it this time. The alarm was loud and she heard voices. Heavy foot steps followed after her and she speed up her speed. This wasn't going to be good. She felt her neck pop as she was janked backwards and into bearing arms. They crushed her against the man's body as he pulled her back the way she'd come.

Jessi:

He smiled. The girl hadn't escaped him. That was good. She would be good possession if he didn't kill her. It would be too easy to do that though. His smile turned to a frown as he found his top guard tried to crush her. "Stop. Put her down." The big dummy dropped her in a heap and stepped back.

"Sorry, master," The big man gruffly said, bowing.

"Get out. Sentri, take her to her room. She'll stay here for now. I have a good feeling some one will pay great money for her." He turned and walked down the hall towards his rooming as the guards disbursed and the butler helped the girl up.
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet




User avatar
Gender Male
Points 890
Reviews 12
Name: 456
age: 16
Race: Human
Special abilites: Medicine
History: Followed his mother's footsteps before she died of a strange cancer. He became very fearful of death and try's to stay away from anything criminal related.
Other: He sticks to his code of " Heal those to in need no matter who they are"
A person's heart is like a painting.
Because it's fragile, yet it bring's the greatest emotions to you.




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 927
Reviews 36
I call a spot! I'll post my bio as soon as I can.! =]
"I'm yet happy and sad at the same time and I'm still trying to figure out how that could be." -Stephen Chbosky




Random avatar
Gender Male
Points 890
Reviews 6
So... what's this story supposed to be about anyway?



Name: Rayn Vameer
Age: 25
Race: Human
Special abilities: She is an Empath. This allows her to sense and control the emotions and feelings of others around her. She can control and release pheromones as well as control peoples emotions with her mind, affecting their fear, anger, lust, calmness, happiness and even being able to induce sleep. Her abilities manifested at the age of twelve, and even though she has some control she has never been totally master her powers. She is always naturally releasing pheromones that cause people to be drawn to her, to like, respect, and want to help her. She usually tries to diminish these pheromones but a few are always leaking out. Besides that she can mentally alter peoples emotions, something she rarely does.

She is a trained soldier and agent, skilled with pistols and martial arts.

History: Rayn gifts manifested young and she was at once caught under the scope of science. They studied and prodded her, and soon she was adopted into the government as an agent to help with control over the Darken city. Her abilities affect humans an aliens alike, making her an ideal peace keeping officer. She quickly moved up the ranks, and now is one of the top undercover agents for Darken City. She helps to maintain the peace by stopping conflicts and going where she is needed.
Other: http://oloferla.deviantart.com/art/Lady ... e-60207549

Name: Kaden Moor
Age: 27
Race: Human
Special abilities: He is a telepath who is able to constantly and always here the thoughts of those around him. He however cannot speak back to most people. Rayn, his partner, is one of the few people he can communicate with, but usually only with a few short sentences at a time.

He has been trained in combat, and is skilled with all sorts of weapons but his favorite type of fighting is close combat, mainly when he gets to use his katanas, though he does posses guns and other weapons.
History: Kaden's power surfaced at the tender age of fourteen, and though his parents tried to shield him he soon was also swept up by the peace keeping forces of Darken City. His ability to hear others thoughts naturally made hjm a valuable ally. It took Kaden nearly 7 years to get to a place where he could go out into public and not be overwhelmed by peoples thoughts and what they were all thinking. He has had years of practice and now is skilled at sifting through thoughts and focusing on ones that are important. His ability makes him a skilled fighter, Interrogator, and spy. Him and Rayn are partners.
Other: http://EvankHorizon.deviantart.com/art/ ... t-43106353 - he uses one to two katanas instead of that monster sword.

Kaden/Rayn

"Mmmm...," Kaden whispered as he deeply inhaled some smoke from the little white cigarette pinched in-between his lips. Tipping his head back Kaden let a small smile slip across his face as a few rain drops began to fall from the sky above. A low rumble of thunder rippled across the sky and a few miles away a flash of lighting lit up the night sky.

"Anything?" a velvety voice purred from behind Kaden.

An annoyed expression briefly replaced the smirk as Kaden slightly turned his head to eye the woman who stood a few feet away. "No Rayn, and if there was you know I would tell you."

"I know," Rayn muttered as she leaned back against the brick wall and absentmindedly dragged the back of her boot heel through a small puddle. "I'm just bored and want to get going."

"Just relax would you?" Kaden growled, "your scattered thoughts are rather distracting, I can't even focus on..." his voice trailed off as his eyes shifted to peer down into the streets below.

"Oh, something turn up?" Rayn excitedly asked as she brushed back a strand of red hair.

"Not sure... there are a couple of thoughts, sounds like their planning a robbery or something, not sure on what, there all just pretty nervous and excited at the moment." He suddenly stiffened up, his face turning serious as he puzzled over something. "Ahhh... there they are, they just past third street... ha, got them, their going toward Leon National Bank."

"Then we can go?" Rayn asked, although she already knew the answer.

Kaden rolled his eyes, "Yes, i'll keep a tab on their thoughts as we head down!" the words weren't even out of his mouth and Rayn had already leapt off the building side. With an exhilarated shout she plummeted a few meters before reaching up and bunching a small black button attached to the backpack strap she wore. The backpack let out a small his as two mechanical wings shot out of the sides as clothe unfolded and stiffened, and seconds later she was soaring up into the air. Kaden merely activated his and then jumped off the building, still rolling his eyes as he muttered. "Crazy witch."

______

Im just giving them some excitement until I know what the story is for all of this.




User avatar
Gender Male
Points 890
Reviews 12
I guess you can call me a mimilist.

If you call that I have no living quarters like the rest of the people in Darken city, and that I almost have no personal property of my own.

So I guess you can call me a mimilist....whatever that is.

I then suddenly heard my door to the infirmary open.
I quickly shut the book and shoved it into my desk.
" Hey doc!"
Two men with construction helmets on their heads came in. One of them had a small board in his arm and he was groaning in pain.
" Doc! This guy is hurting bad."
I sighed and got up from my desk." Yes I can see that." I put on my surgical coat and putted on my gloves.
" How did it happen? And please call me doctor okay?"
The man began to blubber.
" Well we were eatin lunch while we were cleanin the windows outside of a building. When suddenly a freakin thang, I don't know, a metal bird of something-..."
While he was talking I was taking the injured person to another room and inputed my instructions, including sanatizing his arm and knocking the person out so I can operate him.
"- Well the first metal bird didn't do nothin, just flied away, but the second bird went down and scared the craps out of us! And somehow a board speared into my buddy over there!"
I sighed and pushed the man out of the room." Yes yes....we will handle it, don't worry about your friend okay?"
I slammed the door shut and headed into surgery.
A person's heart is like a painting.
Because it's fragile, yet it bring's the greatest emotions to you.



When I was young, I admired clever people. Now that I am old, I admire kind people.
— Abraham Heschel