It’s time for them to learn (Hard Rock)

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(Plucking with a bass)
(Lightly the cello comes in)

Did one day in your life
Some one made you cry?
Or made you heart feel like to die?
You’re the one who is scared is what they tell you
But the feared ones are them selves…

(Roar)
(Guitar and drums enter)

Those heroic strong kids say that you are a not…
But they don’t know- that their future will rot!
They got no power
They will try to use your fear to be their devour!

It’s time for them to learn
That they are the real losers that will always burn!
They are the one’s that don’t have a goddamn life!
You do what you feel
Tell them to get real
Remember that you are the person
That was born to greaten your life!

They can’t stop you
From becoming who you are!
Next thing you know when you become rich
That they can’t stop getting drunk in a bar
They think that they got some back up
But they are just plain stuck up
Fags!!!

Those heroic strong kids say that you are a not…
But they don’t know- that their future will rot!
They got no power
They will try to use your fear to be their devour!

You got a life-brother
You got it all-sister
Let no one rob it away from you
They got nothing else to do!!!

( guitar solo)

Those heroic strong kids say that you are a not…
But they don’t know- that their future will rot!
They got no power
They will try to use your fear to be their devour!

Stay strong!!! (Stretched)
Last edited by lordgluzman on Sun Feb 15, 2009 7:01 pm, edited 3 times in total.
Blood is red
But Heaven is blue
The Devil will fined out
And take you




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Dang, this is pretty good. Better than eanything I've ever written I'll tell you that much, you got spirit kid. Really. I don't say that to just anyone, you should write more like this, not that I've ever seen your work before sorry to say that I missed it. There is kind of a point this crit, I promise... Um even though as I write I still have yet to find it. Anyways, carry on. Good luck, keep writing.

-Max
We're meant to be one
I know we are...
If I am the Sky
Then you are my star... ™




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wow- this is like the second vursion of my other song called ignore the stuck up fags- your basically sending the same message i didbut who cares- good song bra- keep strong



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