As it is right now, chapter 1 of my story has a mention of a Temple, and chapter 2 has a visit to the Temple. Chapter 2 is really the first outright mention of "magic" (even then it is near the end that there is said outright mention) while chapter 1 focuses mostly on what my heroine is thinking about having a marriage forced upon her. If I do a smi-major rework I might be able to get a mention of magic in chapter 1.
If you really must read an sample I will post it, since I now have the two reviews I need to do that.
But I'm just wondering in general. How soon do you want magic mentioned in fantasy?
