How soon should magic be introduced?

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As it is right now, chapter 1 of my story has a mention of a Temple, and chapter 2 has a visit to the Temple. Chapter 2 is really the first outright mention of "magic" (even then it is near the end that there is said outright mention) while chapter 1 focuses mostly on what my heroine is thinking about having a marriage forced upon her. If I do a smi-major rework I might be able to get a mention of magic in chapter 1.

If you really must read an sample I will post it, since I now have the two reviews I need to do that.

But I'm just wondering in general. How soon do you want magic mentioned in fantasy?
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There's no fast or hard rule. Just introduce it when you feel it should be.
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Sureal's right. It's completely up to you as the writer. When is it appropriate in your story? Some writers introduce magic on the first page, and sometimes they introduce it much later. Whatever works for your plot, your characters, and your world. ^^
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The world as it is lends itself to not having magic introduced soon. The heroine has magic, but she's suppressed it. (you find that out in chapter 2) And there aren't really supposed to be mages outside the capital.

I'm just on my way to post chapter 1, so you'll get to see it soon enough.
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It really depends on how soon you want it introduced, like the others have said. In one of my novels, I didn't show that there was magic until a few chapters in, while in the one I'm writing now, I made it clear right away. So yeah, whichever works for you.




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Surreal used the phrase 'hard and fast rule' above me... Well, in my opinion the only hard and fast rule in writing should be that the author do what he/she likes, whenever it feels right. Mention magic whenever you feel you have to, but don't try and force it- writing should be done naturally, with as little 'force' as possible. In my opinion XD
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Nice to know my original thought was best. Sometimes I need to extra confidence.

Thanks everybody! This was what I needed to post my work!
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Just to echo the above - it's best to be introduced whenever it feels like it's best to be introduced. In my current fantasy project, I don't mention magic at all - its existence is implied rather than explicit.

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I agree with pretty much everyone lol: You should introduce it anytime, as long as it flows and as long as you think it's right.
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