FYI my critiquing list

I do professional-er critiques, mostly on poetry. I look around the sections and when I see something that I like or think could use it I critique it. Or people ask me to look at their stuff. right now here's my list of what I'm critiquing right now. If you're interested in me looking at a piece of work and giving it the treatment please feel free to add yourself to the list.

[anything in orange is finished and uploaded]

just another someone - chanson
i know a girl - firestarter
in with the old - ieatworms
the first kiss...again - hunter
me-you night angels - psylynx
raindrops on earlobes - chanson
broken dreams - TBR
"Missing" - little x solider
alien god - arvy
love poem - arvy
Beauty - TBR
Gloomy.... - TBR
Remember Lanie - DarkerSarah
Untitled - marching_gurl89
Book of Rock - sabradan
habiter est une perte de mort - incandescense
Digging at my heart - skeptik_225
four - liz
nine - liz
Untitled (7-19-05) - psylynx
Magnificence - Crysi
I Was His Slave - niteowl
My Trigger Finger is Set - Rincewind
I'll Lower My Voice... - Inertia

as I said if your interested in me looking at a piece of your work please add yourself to the list...

cheers CL

I have a few of these done...now I just have to find my scanner...oh where oh where has the scanner gone...

yay 3 with me
i warn you they are all very very bad though.

Untitled-marching(its an older one in other poetry)

"The book of rock"....its in "other fiction"

dude, be gentle!

and also, thank you very muchly

"Remember Lanie" It's prose, and I know you said you do poetry, but I'd really appreciate if you did this one. This is about the only piece I have on the site that I'm really serious about. Someday, I hope to turn it into a novel. *is full of hot air* So, if you could do some conceptual crits, that'd be good, too.

Thanks

-Sarah

"I Was His Slave" I don't know what poetry forum it's on, but you can find it in my portfolio. It's pretty old, and I've never really gotten constructive criticism on it (except for the one person who thought I was an athiest, but they misinterpreted what I was saying).

It's not a poem, but please check out The Pastel Unicorn in the fantasy section. I'll be posting chapter two today.

If its not too much trouble, could you go and take a look at a piece I'm about to post called "I'll Lower My Voice For The Winter"? It'll be in Other Poetry by the time you read this.

...and come back to my forum!!

Yes Dear!

YAYAYA! Im on the list! *does Being on the list happy dance*