Siddham ( Perfection)

Lama Tian Na...

Incense rising, plooms of mantra.
Taking flight with dusty wings,
I soar through my primal thoughts.

Om mae mae om...

Arcane verses, repeated - eternal.
Muttered with incandescent tounges,
filling the air with dulcet tones.

Siddham...

Perfection.

Hm...this was short, but at the same time, it was quite nice. I think if it was a little longer, it could have been better.

Anyway, this wasn't bad at all. Good work.

Hello kris!

Ugh it seems as though I don't read enough of your work. I actually like this. I love the way it was cultured and the words flowed well and it was short and sweet and beautiful, as always.

Favorite Part:

Arcane verses, repeated - eternal.
Muttered with incandescent tounges,
filling the air with dulcet tones.

Siddham...

Perfection.

May I give you a gold star?

Good job!

Ta,

~Angel

Ty Angel ^^ you do dote on my ego so *blushes*.