Reborn The New Sire

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Danie James:(human) (in the castle with the vamps) ...and he vamp hunter)

She saw Alex's face fall farther but brighten a dagree as he ended his call. He looked a little happy but this was Jared. Only Jared truely knew Raven of both of them. And she felt some one staring a hole in her. She looked just as the vampire hunter turned to stare out the window. He looked like he had experience with killing vampires but why was he here and not killing or trying to kill the vampires in the room?

She let her fall to her knoledge of Maria and the fact that there had been a vampire hunter there. She only slightly knew Maria and to a degree she looked up to her too. SHe sighed and let her eyes fall to the floor.
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

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*Dang myfriendsavamp, you straight up treated Oliver lol*

Oliver (werewolf)-

Oliver stood up and shook himself. He was acting very strangly. He muttered something unintelligable about Genima under his breath and then began to walk again. He hadn't wandered far from home so when his mother began calling for him he turned into wolf form and sprinted home.

He wandered into his house and curled up on the floor still in wolf form. His mother came out in human form and he quickly changed, "You needed me?" He asked.

"I just wanted you home before it got too late," she said, the far off look in her eyes. She wasn't really all there, she hadn't been since his dad left.

"Okay, lets get you to bed." he said helping her to her room. Oliver never slept here anymore, he always just put his mom to bed then waited for her to fall asleep so he could leave. He mostly slept in the forrest.
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~Onya~

I couldn't sleep tonight. I havent ever slept in a bed and I knew that I would get used to it, but tonight I needed to sleep on the crushing leaves in the forest. I exited my little room about the same time as another werewolf exited his. I watched him walk to the forest slowly. Obviously he was just going to relax. I decided to follow. I ran to catch up with him. The good thing about me is when I am trying to be quiet and non-reckless then I am extremly loud and clumsy, but when I am running without thought you would sware that I was a floating ghost. I never hear my feet hit the ground. I was soon behind him.

"Where ya' goin'," I asked. He jolted around quickly and stared at me for a moment before answering.

"What are you doing up past your bed time?" He asked me. I just remembered his name. It was Oliver. I remembered Garret telling me about him.

"Well, Oliver, what can I say? I'm a law breaker. Serious goblin type," I replied with a smile. I tried to put my hand smoothly on a tree. Instead my hand slipped and my head banged against the tree. I pulled back up quickly and he laughed hysterically as I rubbed the spot where a bump the size of an egg would for sure be tomorrow. I smiled and ran again. I threw myself down where there was an opening in the canopy of the forest. I stared at the moon with Oliver soon sitting across from me.

"Why am I so important? Why are other Were's being told to protect me?" I asked lightly. There was a moment of peace as I awaited his answer.
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Kalie:

Kalie woke up wrapped tight in Cale's arms. She yawned and stretched trying to pull free of his grasp. He just tightened his arms and she rammed her elbow in his gut. "Cale, let me go!"

"No." He moaned nuzzling his face in her hair. She sighed and took a deep breath.

"Cale, let me up. I'm not going anywhere." She laughed pulling against his arms.

"I'm not taking that chance." He replied. She laughed as his breath tickled her neck.

"Cale, I need to get up!" She laughed squirming in his grasp.

"No you don't." He replied. She hit him in the gut again knowing full well that it wouldn't do her any good.

"Please, please, please." She said softly.

"Your a tease." He groaned letting her go. She climbed out of bed and changed into clean clothes and smiled at him putting her hands on her hips.

"No, your a pain." SHe smiled and walked to the kitchen of the house and quickly mixed together some breakfast. He came out his hair completely disaray. She hadn't reliezed how much she had missed the small things about him. She fixed his hair and handed him some food.

Cale:

Cale smiled at her and finished the food quickly. He pulled her close and kissed her. He missed her so much.

"Are you going to talk to Garret?" She asked pulling back and smiling.

"About?" He asked trying to kiss her again. She didn't let him.

"About us getting our pack together and him letting us stay til we do. Also I want you to make peace with him and then I want you to see what we can do to help around here." She said softly. "And I'm mighty tempted to come along to make sure you do exactly that."

"Now, Kalie, you aren't serious." Cale frowned.

"Will you behave?" She asked looking at him.

"Yes'm." He smiled.

"Good, you do just that." She replied smiling and kissing him softly then wrestling from his grasp and cleaning up. "Now, go!" He laughed and walked out of the house running a hand through his hair.
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*** To keep the peace I'll let TN have the morning post and I'll get the sunrise post up. Um Onya and Oliver can keep there conversation going or skip and look back on it. Withever you perefer. I'll do the sunrise post since it skipped and the castle posts will be behind than the posts away or at the Lycan clan to let you be aware*

Danie James: (human) (castle at sunrise)

She felt her hair whip back behind her as the helicopter came to landing and two figures entered the castle gates. Her attention fell to the scary looking vampire who came out first, followed by a werewolf. And in turn after the scary vampire stool a glance at her he turned and held his hand out to another paled hand in which was in turn Maria's. She'd hear so much about Maria that this one seamed the perfect amtch though her attitude was surely to either be worse or better.

Maria: (vampire) (castle)

"I never thought we would actually go and help one of our enemies to get some one taht could bring back someone that would bring us down," She said witha snide remark. She heard a laugh and turned. A vamire hunter. She smirked. Seams there would be all sorts like the human girl that was staring at her with aww. "Can I have a bite?" The question was for Alex to answer but it was never answered. Seva had to burst in.

Seva-Gora: (vampire/werewolf) (castle... now)

She stopped as the wind blew around her. She was pooped and she needed to get away. "Here she is. Let me be gone for a bit before you take over my postition. Bye. With that she she left leaving another in her place.

Raven: (vampire) (castle)

She stood as the helicopter blades blew her hair out of her face. Her eyes darted across the faces. Seva had told her that Jared would be at this place. She didn't recognize any of these faces as Jared. But she did recognize the human. "Raven?" She heard some one asked. She turned and saw some boy infront of her. Wait. Was that really him. Seva hd told her he had changed a bit but this wasn't a bit. He was a lot diffrent.

"Is that realy you Jared?"

"Part of me," Alex replyed not of his own acord. This was Jared once more.

"Alex, huh?" Seva smiled. The boy blushed. "Such a diffrence..." She remarked.

Seva: (half bread) (lycan clan)

She heard the grunts and the disaproval of the werewolves as she entered. She was not one of them by birth. SHe was one because of a friend she had made apon her death and her rebirth. She bowed her head and stepped farther in. The leader, Garrett rushed out of one of the tents. "What is this?" He asked in a rushed tone.

"I wish not to be a nusence. I am not here as the vampire leader. I am not it at the being. The ont to take my place after my death in a few days is meeting someone to bring him to power. I wish to stay here and get away from the problems I have.." She looked up through her hair and watched his expresion change to confussion. "I just ask for a few days of peace. I will not bother you. I will hunt alone. I will be out fo the way. Please." The lycan leader seamed to consider for a moment.

"Fine. If you wish I will hige you board."

"No. I do not wish to stay in one of your tents. I don't mean to disgrace you but I wish to stay in the woods and sleep out in the open. Thank you, Garrett." She turned and headed into the woods, feeling the heat come into her face.

****There. Now your guy, Oliver can come in after you finish up the post from the night before or whatever. ^-^****
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*goody*

Oliver (werwolf)

Oliver smiled at the silence left between him and Onya, "That's not important stuff right now. You really should get back, before they find that you've gone. I'll be in loads of trouble."

"I don't want to!" She winned. Oliver sighed and rolled his eyes. He wasn't much for children. He would just have to carry her, kicking and screaming.

When he lifted her up she put up a bit of a struggle then finally gave in. He was much stronger than her, and she knew it. If would have been easier to transform into wolf form but he didn't mind walking through the forest, especially at night.

"You know I really don't-" He heard a twig snap.

"Shh!" He hushed her setting Onya down and keeping a protective hold of her. He wasn't usually like this either, protective. He turned in circles trying to pinpoint the source of the noise. Another twig snapped and he turned into wolf form wrapping his small body around Onya's legs and growling.

"Whats going on?" Onya asked, a hint of fear to her voice. A girl emmerged from the trees. She looked sad and non-threatening. Oliver changed back into human form but kept Onya behind him. This girl smelled very...different. He had heard of her, a half breed.

"Onya, go back to the clan. Now." He ordered. He watched her think about arguing then give up and walk back to the clan.

"What are you doing here?" Oliver asked, not sure if Garett had approved her being so close to the clan.

*I don't know much about how the whole half breed thing works so...take it away*
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Seva-Gora: (halfbread) (in the woods with oliver)

She looked up. It was a werewolf. He looked concerned about something. Maybe for his clan. "I'm trying to get away from my troubles..." She stoped before her thoughts got the best of her. She sighed. "I just nead to lay down. With that she basicly fell to the ground, her hair spread out around her head.

*Short... Um half bread is just that she is vampire and werewolf. She does not have to be born it though. She was turned after she died as a vampire and then was reborn as a werewolf and vampire... Technalcy she hasn't fully died yet though.* ANy help?*
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Oliver(werewolf)(in the woods with Seva)

The vampire, or werewolf or whatever said she needed to lay down and then she just fell. She fell very gracefully though. Oliver was concerned at first, maybe something was wrong. It wasn't in his nature to be concerned like this. Maybe it was because Garrett had asked him to be the next alpha, maybe it was changing him.

He fought mentally with himself before saying, "Are you alright?"

The girl sighed a, "Yes," and then fiddled with a piece of her hair.

"You sure?" Oliver asked becoming very intrigued in this creature. She smelled like nothing he had ever smelled before and was so serenly beautiful. She had a sad look in her eyes, something distant and far gone. Then as he moved towards her she turned and looked at him, her eyes filling with light.

"I'm Seva," She told him. He got closer to her then knelt down tilting his head from side to side trying to figure her out.

"Oliver." He replied, glad he remembered his name, "Why are you here." He was still moving closer to her. She sat up and met his gaze and held it.

"Just to rest in peace." She said a smile appearing and fading across her full lips. He wasn't sure if he should be so close to her, after all she was half vampire, half enemy. Garrett didn't talk about how he felt on the subject of half breeds, since there was only one, it was rarely a topic of discussion.

She was enticing. He was losing control.
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I'm so sorry I haven't posted lately. Could someone please tell me wats going on???
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*I think your characters are on the roof or grounds of the vamp castle and a helicopter has just arrived containing Maria, Raven etc.*

Shakian (Vampire Hunter)

The half breed seemed eager to leave and I had no power to stop her. Pity, she'd have made interesting hunting...and I really needed to break this pact with Alex, I didn't know how much longer I could spend around vamps before my urge to hunt rose to an unbearable level; maybe if he became completely Jared...a plan was beginning to form, but was dashed away when a rather loud voice dragged me back to reality.

...I never thought we would actually go and help one of our enemies to get someone that could bring back someone that would bring us down

I laughed at this ridiculous statement (these vamps really needed to learn where their loyalties lay) and earned a glance of contempt from the vampire I assumed to be Maria before she smirked and seemed to completely forget about me.
My early suspicions were then proved correct when the half breed spoke up before strutting off indignantly. I think she was muttering, but sadly even my well-trained ears did not pick up what she was muttering about over the whirring of the helicopter blades.
I watched her walk away for a while before turning and obidiently following the group back inside the castle.
"This is my plan of attack"

"Hmmm, looks more like a pin to me"

"No, it's definitely a tac"




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~Solange Deprivo~

I was eager to see Jordan again. We had bonded very well earlier this morning. I grabbed some bread because I would need a late night snack. I picked up my dress and walked out of the house making sure that the floor boards didn't creak. I was soon running in the forest. I ran faster until I came to the spot where he told me we would meet again. I sat and waited, listening to the bugs making music. I listened to the trees' whispers. I listened to river nearby running smoothly. All these beautiful noises and the moon out, shining through the canopy of the forest, made this a really amazing spot to be in every night. I laid down and stared into the night sky, watching the stars fly by.

~Onya~

I was soon back at the gathering of Were's. I sighed and walked to my room that was located outside. I was angry that Oliver didn't answer my question. I was angry that Oliver pushed me away so he could protect me.

"Why is everyone so worried?! WHY ME!" I screamed into the air. No lights went on. Man, Werewolves can sleep. I walked into my room and threw myself on the floor. I couldn't go on the bed, not yet. I laid there and that's when a gust of wind flew past me and blew out my candle. I jumped up in my fighting position. The laughing, the screaming, it was so loud. I couldn't bare it anymore. I grabbed my pillow and threw it across my room knocking over the glass prism on my Oak desk. I picked up the chair and threw it down on the desk cracking it and breaking the chair. I went to my mattress of hay and tore it apart. I heard footsteps running to me. I fell to my knees covering my ears. Garret was soon by my side.

"What's wrong? What happened?" Garret asked softly, holding my bare shoulders.(Her shirt is strapless and it doesn't cover her whole belly) I screamed again.

"It's to loud! Make it stop! It's hurting me!" I screamed. Garret let go of me and Ginny was sitting next to me comforting me. Then it stopped as a young Werewolf walked into the room. It was as if the thing was scared of him. I was on my hands and knees now breathing slowly, loudly. I felt the sweat drip from my nose to the floor.

I looked around and everyone in here were men, and Ginny. They looked scared out of there minds. I didn't blame them. But how did they think I felt. I was the girl hearing the unhearable. I looked back to the floor and lost my balance. I felt the wet floor against my face before I blacked out.


~Garret Deprivo~

I was filled with rage. I had specifically told Solange and Oliver to watch her, to protect her.

"Goreno!" I yelled. He was in front of me in an instant.

"Yes, Sire?" he questioned.

"I want you to call for Solange and Oliver. Tell them that I have a meeting in my quarters and they better be there," I said. I looked to the horizon. The colors were to rise in about three hours.

"I already called for them, even went into their rooms. They aren't there," Goreno said. I stopped walking and turned to him. He wasn't joking. I let out a roar as loud as a war cry. I turned to my building and started to walk again. I would wait until they were here to yell at them. I wasn't ready right now to find them. I was seriously angry and I swear, if I was messed with right then then I probably would of knocked somebody's brains out. I am not kidding.
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****TNC, I will bring you in soon! I promise!
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Emily Meyer (vampire)

Emily sat on the roof of the castle looking at the sky. The sky had beautiful clouds that were a beautiful white. Emily looked down over the roof and saw Bryan sitting on the steps.

"Hey, down there!" Emily yelled. Bryan looked side to side. Emily giggled. Bryan finally looked up and smiled.

"Hey, what are you doing up there?" He asked.

"Looking and thinking."

"About what?"

"The life I had before."

"Do you remember anything?"

Emily turned her head. Bryan had appeared right next to her. He was looking at her with intense eyes.

"Pits and pieces. Nothing big. Whenever I try to remember, I can't. It's like it's blocked from me." Emily said, while frowning.

"If it helps, I can't really remember either." Bryan said, looking at the sky.
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Bryan Wood (vampire)

Bryan knew he was lieing. Bryan could remember a lot. Except one detail: why his parents abandonded him. So he consided this detail as a lost memories.

"You can't?" Emily asked.

"...Nope..." Bryan answered.

It got quiet. Suddenly, the air started the whip around them, and a loud noise started to fill the air.

"I guess they're here." Bryan said, getting up.

"Who's here?" Emily asked, walking down to the ground.
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Jordan(vampire)

He crept up on Solange. "Hello my princess" he whispers in her ear, she smiles and turns around.

"I have been waiting for you" Solange said, Jordan sat down beside her and held her hand.

"Solange...You do no that i'm a vampire, and it will be hard for me to see you"Jordan told her as he squezes her hand.

Jared/Alex(vampire)

He could feel Jared again. "Raven... They've got her" Alex said and the vampire in fornt of him sighed. "Leal will you come with me.." he asked the beautiful woman that stood beside him. " in fact you can all come and meet Jared"

Siren(neko)

Ballow was smothering Uzaki and wouldnt let him go. Siren was jared's cousin but she never got to see him no more. She could feel it when anything happened to jared or Alex and would send messeges to her without himself knowing. "Tobi, Raven has been captured and I would like it if you came with me and Ballow to stop the werewolfs attacking the vampires" Siren said as she got closer to the vampire.

emily(werewolf)

She watched Solange and Jordan the whole time. it was such a beautiful relationship and wishes she could have someone. *wink wink people*
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