Conflict 101

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How many different kinds of conflict are there? One? Two? Fifty? Writers actually have a choice of three basic types of conflict:

1. Internal conflict: with the self, i.e. a character's values, attitudes, prejudices. Think of Salinger's The Catcher in the Rye, or the ending to Ian McEwan's Atonement.
2. External conflict: driven by external forces, such as the environment (natural disasters, anyone?), social classes, the supernatural/otherworldly, morals, culture, duties, obligations, even time.
3. Interpersonal conflict: against other people, like families, friends, neighbours.

For any story to be successful, it has to utilise all three at the same time. A great example is F. Scott Fitzgerald's The Great Gatsby: the narrator, Nick Carraway, feels drawn to Gatsby's hedonistic lifestyle but at the same is repulsed by it (Internal conflict); Carraway and Gatsby come from different social standings (External conflict); Carraway's friend, Daisy Buchanan, feels trapped by her husband's controlling personality (Interpersonal conflict).

It's often helpful to go through these kinds of conflict when editing: does your story lack one (or more) of them? What could you do to emphasise the conflict? Could you intensify the differences in characters, add a time limit to raise the stakes or force your protagonist into making a critical choice?

Remember, conflict is the lifeblood of drama. Happy families make bad stories!

To summarise:
1. There are three types of conflict: internal, external and interpersonal.
2. We need to use all three to get the best story.
3. Rework your characters and your plot to use all the elements of conflict.

Good luck!

Gahks

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Last edited by Gahks on Sun Oct 26, 2008 10:53 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Writing for specific conflicts is all good, but tweaking your characters personalities to suit the conflict themsleves is redudant. The whole conflict tree is just to categorize conflict, not set a gold standard or anything.

Having a random earthquake pop up during your story isn't going to make it any more well written. Making a character into a obsessive freak isn't going to suddenly change him from having a flat and lifeless personality. If one character realized their husband/wife was trapped in a burning building, do you think they'd really stop and think about whather to leave them there and be safe if they were a couple married for twenty years?

All the stuff listed is very basic.

Yeah, it's good to have all three in one story, but to conciously set out to do so is totally unnatural. It's better to just write what you want to write, not keep wondering "Oh, I don't have interpersonal conflict in this chapter!!! And the external plot really isn't coming together...". 90% of the time, you'll have done all three kinds without even thinking about it.

I mean, just try to think a story where there's either no; plot, character who thinks about the plot, or has a human (or whatever) antagonist/relationship.
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Of course you shouldn't start out with this in mind, but working through the three types of conflict can be useful when editing. And remember, "Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration"!

Don't forget also that intense conflict leads to change in your characters and hence paves the way for three-dimensional characterisation.

Gahks
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