What I Love About You

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What do I love about you?

I love the way you always smell good
A mixture of shampoo, toast and fresh air
A scent that floats around, like a phantom

I love the way you speak, cryptically
Never quite sure what you mean.
But that doesn't matter
It's how you say it. With that mouth.

I love the way you know everything
A fountain of knowledge
How you can elaborate on things
So meticulous and precise, without error

I love the way you make me feel
Like a princess in a tower
Beautiful and serene. Perfect
The only person that counts

I love the way you hold my hand
Tightly gripping, vice like, unwilling to let go
But reassuringly gentle at the same time
Make me grip you back, tighter.

I love the way you hug me, enveloping
Tightly, passionately, with feeling
A way that makes me feel like we're one
Not two people embracing.

I love the way I can be myself with you
With all my flaws, scars, imperfections
On display for you too see, naked. Vulnerable.
But without fear, sure you won't care or even notice them.

I love the way you make me your world
Almost like I own the hemisphere. It's mine.
You can be my sun, shining, radiating
I'd revolve around you all day until darkness.

I love the way you make me love you
And this is what I love most, the way I can't explain it
The way I love you just because
The way you love me because you want to to

What do I love about you?
Everything




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There comes a time in everyone's life that you love someone, but you don't know why. And the way you described it, was great. It was really good! It stayed strong throughout the whole piece.
So if you love someone, but you don't know why, remember the most important part. You love them! :D
"A journey of a thousand miles must begin with a single step." ~ Lao-tzu

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Thanks for the nice comments!
How are you?
Sarah
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

THAT IS THE WEETES THING I HAVE EVER HEARD I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!!!
~OdD~OnE~




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Thanks for the nice comments
I appreciate them
S
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Wow, I love it!
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It's very sweet.




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Thats really pretty. I love the way that in you presented it, you left it wide open, but not. I don't know if you meant it to be like that, but that's how it seems it turned out to me. If you want to relate and you have someone who you think if perfect in every way, they fit the model you portrayed well, perfectly.
I think you did a truly amazing job.

-Lynne

Oh by the way, I gave you a gold star.
You deserve it. :D
I will not play tug o' war. I'd rather play hug o' war. Where everyone hugs instead of tugs, Where everyone giggles and rolls on the rug, Where everyone kisses, and everyone grins, and everyone cuddles, and everyone wins. ~Shel Silverstein



Light griefs are loquacious, but the great are dumb.
— Seneca