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A woman is in a room with a window and a door. There is a table and one chair.
The door opens, and a man come in.
"We'll be with you in a moment," the man says. "Don't open the window."
The man left before the women could say anything. She sat down on the chair with a sight.
“So they keep telling me,” the women murmur. “You’d think they never get tired of it. And me mumbling like a old fool.”
After a few minute she got up again and paced around the room. The room was small and square. The wall, ceiling, and floor were at the moment, of a shiny white and bare. The table and chair were also white. The table was in the middle and was glued to the floor. The light would change color every two hour.
“At lease it still white,” the women added after sitting down on the chair. “ If only I knew the time, or at least if I had something to do.”
She got up to look around the room trying to find an occupation. But like always, she find nothing. And like always she wants to the window. Of course it was a fake window. It was showing only white. And like always she presses her hand on the window to make sure it was fake. Then she let her hand trail along the wall trying to find the door, without any success. A tear fell on her face. She rube it up angrily.
“I’m not going to go crazy. I won’t let them! I swear it!”
The women sat down on the floor in a corner of the room and pull her knees up against her chest. She rests her head on her knees, her long black hair creating a veil. In her hair a few new white hair stood out. Silent tear started rolling down her cheek. This time she didn’t dry them away but let them flow freely. She sat there for some time. She was about to fall asleep when the door. She raises her head. The room was all blue. The man entered. He too was dress in blue.
"We'll be with you in a moment," the man says. "Don't open the window."
And like always he left before she could say a word. The room at that moment change color again and the window disappears. Now the women was in a windowless doorless green room. She didn’t even react. The room changed to red then yellow, before she finely got up. She walks twist around the room. Before she sat down in a different corner, this time facing the wall
“Now let see, I have a idea. I will tell a story to myself. I will close my eyes, in this way I wont see the color change.” The women smile. “ Yes I will tell a story like I have never heard before. Then when I get out of this place I will find my little ones and tell them this great story. The story shall be about a grand kingdom far over the seven seas. In the seventh land…”
"We'll be with you in a moment. Don't open the window."
The women raise her head, her expression surprise. She turns just in time to see the man exit. She smiles.
“This is good. I didn’t even hear him enter. I knew it was a good idea. Where was I? Oh yes ”
“In the seventh land, lived a young prince. He was house in a mushroom. He loved his house. And every morning he would get up. Eat his breakfast, then he would open all the windows of he small house. He had exactly five windows. After that was done, he go outside and water his lettuce. He life was almost perfect. The only problem was that he couldn’t all the lettuces that his small garden was producing. So many of the lettuce want bad. It made him sad, for his lettuces were very good. One day as he was watering his lettuces, he heard a strange noise. Curious our young mushroom prince, as the animal in the forest called him, turn and walk were he thought he had heard the noise. As he made his way between the tall grasses, he came noise to noise with a baby snail. It was of a beautiful color. Of red, blue, and yellow. It was so beautiful that Mushroom prince didn’t notice at fires that the snail was hurt. Its shell was cracked in many places. The Mushroom prince feeling sorry made a sign for the snail to follow him. The snail didn’t move for it didn’t understand what the young man wanted. So the Prince put his hand genteelly on the snail head. The snail in fear backs up. That made the small man wonder. Nobody had been afraid of him before. How to get the snail to follow? Then he had an idea. He run back to his garden picks up some leaf of the delicious lettuces, then run back to the snail. The prince presents one leaf to the snail. The snail smelled it, before taking a little bit. After chewing thoroughly the snail decide that it was good. He was about to take an other bit, but the prince backs off. The prince did so until they had both reach his small mushroom house. Once there…”
"We'll be with you in a moment. Don't open the window."
This time the woman did not even bother to look up and continued her story. The man puzzled, was slower to leave then as he had done before. As the man came back, the woman didn’t even notice but continued on her story.
“Once there, the little gave the snail a armful of lettuces. After that he want into his small house to get every thing that he need to bandage the broken shall of the poor snail. By the time he was finish bandaging all the little crack of the shell, it was getting dark. The little prince happy but tired went in to take his diner, after saying good night to his new friend. He went…”
“ I told you that it wasn’t normal,” the man who had come in numbers of time said. He was followed by an other man who didn’t seem very please about the situation. Both were wearing doctor jacket.
“Well we better figure it before the king come down here, to ask why we stop the program,” the second man add his voice dragging as if it hurts him to speak.
“ What should we do?”
“I’m not sure. Let see if she can stand up. Maybe she is crazy.”
“Without meaning any disrespect Mr. Lee, but she look pretty sane to me”
“We never know. Close the door Paul.”
“Yes sir”
Paul hurry obeys the order, while the other man went to stand behind the woman. She was still telling the story, paying no notice of the man behind him. Mr. Lee kicks her hard in her ribs, making her yelp in pain.
“Get up”
The woman slowly got up to her full height, and turn around. She stood strait despair of the pain in her ribs, and look at the man strait in the eyes.
“ She sane all right, sir. Look at her.” Paul murmur to Mr. Lee.
“Let me be the judge of that,” Mr. Lee answered Paul before saying to the women. “Are you Sane?”
The women didn’t answer. She let her gaze swipe over the room, and she smiled.
“Yes, I’m sane. What about you sir?”
“Don’t ask question, it not your place.”
“Very well sir, now if you excuse me, I’m busy.” The women walk around the man, sat on the chair. A smile was still playing on her lips. She angles the chair so she could watch the two men. As she did the room change color to a dark green. Both of the men jump.
“Why are you so jumpy gentleman, afraid of the dark?” the women ask, an innocent expression on her face. You could hear the smile in her voice. She didn’t wait for the answer and turn away from the two man.
Mr. Lee walks over to the chair.
“ Well if you’re so smart, lady. What time is it? Because I have a date with my girlfriend and I wouldn’t want to be late. Well?” He voice was full of malice.
“I’ll be with you in a moment. Don't open the window.” The women replied without looking up.
Mr. Lee turn as red as a tomato.
“ I will get the king and you will regret it, let me tell you.”
“ I’m sure.”
“Paul, open the door we are going out.”
“Uh sir. We have a small problem.”
The women cover her smile with her hand when she heard the last sentence.
“What is it?”
Mr. Lee turns to Paul clearly annoyed.
“ The door can open from the inside.” Paul murmur.
“What? You idiot! Why did you close it?”
“But sir, you told me too!”
Now the woman didn’t bother to hide her amusement and laugh, a clear and pure laugh.
“You think it funny women?”
Mr. Lee walks over to her, and hid her across the face. The woman fell to the floor with a cry of pain. Blood formed on her lips, and her nose was bleeding in abundance. It didn’t stop Mr. Lee. He went around the table to have a better angle, and kick her in the side again and again.
“Sir! Sir! I don’t think you should. Sir!” Paul tried to stop Mr. Lee from kicking, but he was stop by Mr. Lee fits in his head. The door open and a tell man enter. The two men froze.
“ Mr. I thought that I had made it clear before that we don’t hit patient physically,” the new man said with an icy look in the direction of Mr. Lee. “I believe you’re in trouble. The king wants you. If I were you I would hurry.” Mr. Lee hurry out of the room, giving a dirty look at the tall man on the way out.
“You!” the man said in the direction of Paul. “ Whatever your name is, get a nurse. Now!”
“Yes, my Lord.”
After Paul left the man sight, and hurry to the body of the women.
“Suzy? Suzy?”
“Sam? Is it really you?”
“Yes, it me honey. Don’t move. You’re going to need to be very brave now.” Sam tarred a peace of his shirt, and wipes carefully the blood. He straitens her nose, as he did the women let out a yell. “That my girl. Don’t worry I’ll get you out of here.”
“I knew you would come. I…”
“Shhhh, don’t talk. Can you stand?”
“I think so”
“Here I’ll help you. Slowly now.”
The women carefully stood lining on Sam.
“Now try to take a step”
She did and was able to take a few more.
“Good. We need to hurry now”
The women and the man the man left the room for the last time.
