This is just a start

Tell me what you think about this, im unsure about what i have written it is only a small bit tho sorry.

How do I start then? Well a better question would be what would you like to know? I am not anyone special, anyone worth remembering, I’m going to drift through this life unnoticed, unwanted. Here I will explain how the unremarkable girl lives, the one who hides everything from everyone, the reason, well no one cares.

It's very intriguing...yet maybe I need more of it to be able to judge sufficiently! The only thing I could possibly say is that I have read numerous pieces of the same ilk before now so it will need to be of a really high standard to make an impact on its audience...

And you are supposed to submit two reviews before you post your own stuff!

oh sorry i thought i had to do that after sorry