young love

me and the first person i ever love + a poem i wrote



your you.
im me.
too very different people
its hard to belive...
but we are in love.
noone understands.
but one day i know..
he'll take my hand.
we fight,we love, we lose, we hurt.
but we always return to each other.
and its hard to believe.
we both know..
in the end it'll be you and me
once again

Your you.

I’m me.

Too very different people

It’s hard to believe...

But we are in love.

No one understands.

But one day I know...


He'll take my hand.

We fight, we love, we lose, we hurt.

But we always return to each other.

And it’s hard to believe.

We both know…

In the end it'll be you and me,

[/b]Once again

[b](Words in black, corrections) Over all, very good poem. The only thing is, you had one or two spelling mistakes and your caps were missing. Other then that, brilliant. Keep up the good work.

i'm really happy for both of you *hugs*

were not dating anymore
just good friends
but thanks

i'm stiil happy for both of you
(not everyone can stay a good friend with the person with who you broke up..)

*hugs*

I truly love the simplicity in this poem yet the meaning it has is heavy on the heart.
Really Good job keep it up..

I would like to see more from you!