Son of the Devils!

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First story in a long time to post. Hope you like. ^-^
She laughed with them. It always was whole heartedly. Always. The boy from the other table scoffed. She turned on him, brown eyes piercing. “What’s so funny?” She asked. She had met a few of them. Maybe she should record her encounters with his like.
“Nothing funny. Just amusing,” Her answered her with a light smile. She knew every smile to be at least a little fake from them.
“Why so amusing?” She asked, her brows furrowing.
“How can you laugh when you know that there are some trying to take you down? Some trying to push to the top for air? Look at me for example.” He leaned over the table becoming face to face with her. “I’m only here to take you down. Well to convince you anyways. Look. You’re wearing white today. How quant.” He gave a smile. “You know one day you’ll be wearing black just for me,” He said as he walked around the table to stand before her. She was short compared to him. Quite short. Her brown hair showered over her shoulders to her back as she looked up at him defiantly but with smile.
“It’s always a show remember?” She said to him.
“Ah. Always a show. Do I ever get to see one of your performances?” He asked as he bent over her. The girl looked around. Her friends had gone. None were her best friend. She never had one. “See?” He asked into her ear. “You have no true reason to stay. Join me back down to the underworld. I promise no one will touch you. I’ll make sure you’re by my side so that my brothers can’t touch you.” He pulled away to find her scowling.
“No. I never make my decision final unless I’ve thought it through. You of all know that, Gabriel.” His eyes locked onto hers at his name.
“Are we going by name-”
“Don’t say it. You know that if you say it…” She gave a shiver as he turned her around and wrapped his arms around her.
“This, Sam Uel D- Saint?” He whispered into her ear. She felt black wings come from his back. Not of feathers but of darkness. With them encircling her she felt pain again as a house not far from the park burst into to flames. She gasped, not able to grasp it still.
“Why do you call my name so?” She asked, holding a sob down in her throat. Her hands gripped his arms not out of comfort but out of clinging. She never really understood why they would each say her name in turn.
“Oh, you know why. Deep down you do. The eldest will surly tell you. I must be going now. Oh. Just to note all but three have said your name now. If you wish to stay on this lonely earth try to stop them. If not…” He gave a shrug as he glanced back at her. And he was gone. So plainly gone but it still hurt. She fell to the ground with a sob.
“Sam?” She heard the familiar voice. She pulled her head from her knees and looked up into his blue eyes.
“Mm?” She asked groggily almost. Tears still streaked down her cheeks as she heard the sirens coming closer.
“We have to fix this. Do remember what to do?” The angel asked. She gave a slow nod and her held his hand out to her. He hugged her and then pulled her away to wipe her wet cheeks.
“Thank you, James. You always seam to come at the right time,” She told him as she buried her face against his chest once more.
“Speak the words with me this time and it will help considerable,” He informed as he focused on the match stick of a house.
Together they said it. Aloud and in heart. “Sam-ite la Soure.” The house’s flames went out just like that and many of the firefighters stopped in their tracks as they were approaching the house. A cry came and three figures came running out of the house, dancing with joy.
“Good girl,” James said to her as he stroked her hair smooth once more. “You’re getting to make this a habit you know?” He asked. He laughed when he felt her slight vibrations and the warmth against his chest as she breathed on him.

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I Have a question to ask the readers. As above should the bad guys win or the good guys? Mix it up or no.

Explanation of story? Here you go.
Okay. Now Sam is an average girl you see? Yes? No? Anyways. Sam has the power to change the bible and some other cool things like who wins in the end. The Devil or God. Now I favor God all the time but hey (horses eat that ^-^) why not see what the readers want out of this. I was just wondering. And in case you were wondering about explanations for the different characters and things if enough people like this and the idea I’ll continue and write stuff that’s happened before this and after because she has to meet the oldest son of the devil of course.

Any who. I’ll shut up and let you babble now. ^-^
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